All Comments on 'Wheeling Park Ch. 01'

no incest here not even a tab bit of erotica

I look forward to see how this turns out. I did not vote (sorry), as there was no incest, erotica or sex. The tags you chose for the story promise some good fun though:)

Don't stop now! People would like to hear what happens from here on in, I'm sure.

I read the latest one first and as an 72 year old widow with many girlfriends. Widow for a month and 72 for a week I wanted to know where this was coming from. Never to old for sex but romance first I always believed. So far you have pushed all my buttons. I will comment more after I read the in- between's.

LOL

Janice

After several paragraphs, I started skipping down. Then I couldn't even skim all the way through. Zzzzzzzzzz! Well, I started to get out of the story, then thought I would read the comments. Then, I realized that this was a story accidentally in the wrong category. You meant to submit this to readers digest, didn't you? It might have had good content, but it bored me too quickly for me to find it!

.. start, let's see how it progresses.

Are you on some sort of drugs? NICE START? FUCKING AWFUL!

Wonderful start...though I found that when Trudy chose sexier clothes and even lingerie at the store...(and choice to wear it in the RV with the kids)...a bit of a stretch...the chapter was tight, well thought out and extremely well put together.

The author has a talent to put us in whatever characters shoes he wants...

This is my favorite author in Literotica so far...

I was truly marked by Ameanor's other novel, "My Other Mother" which I consider a classic and a true benchmark for all the other authors to strive for ...myself included.

The author is obviously not familiar with policing in Ontario,but the R.C.M.P does not patrol the province. That's the jurisdiction of the Ontario Provincial police.