All Comments on 'When No Woman Equals Mom Ch. 01'

That he couldn't recognize the stars as just breaks in the story and thus missed an excellent read. My only criticism would be that you should have used 5 stars at the breaks as a subliminal urge toward scoring the story. I didn't need that, however, 5 *'s from me. as to the first commentator, go back and finish the story you've missed out.

I hope the author plans more chapters. I am curious where the story will go. Son impregnates mother, son takes more lovers, son allows mother to have sex with others, etc.

Great story; my only hang up: usage errors. Your v. you're, there v. their v. they're.

Great story so far and just another reminder of why you are on my list of favorite authors. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I do have another two chapters in some form of rough draft. I hope you like.

There are a thousand stories on this theme and written so much better than this one.

I loved the story, getting curious as to where the story will go from there, can't wait for the future chapters. I personally would want Ivanka to pleasure any man Zach wants without hiding the identity that she's his mother. Also, I'd have liked Bob not to get pushed down into a robot kind of mode where he does anything and his mind has stopped working apparently. The sex was explained excellently, generally it gets boring with same stuff, but you kept it exciting. Great job, hope the next one is coming in a day or two.

Does anyone really fantasize about brainwashing someone to want them? Are you that hard up that no one would want you otherwise. This has to have been written by a 28 year old dungeons and dragons player living in his parents basement until he gets a job at marvel comics.

Very yummy indeed! I can't wait to read more and where you take it! Thank you!

Looking forward to second chapter 5*****

I enjoyed this a lot. Thank you.

As usual. How about some anal for her and pegging of Zach by mom. Zach is pretty cocky (pun intended). Keep it up.

Can't wait for chapter 2!

I am so sorry I missed this when it first was published. This story pushed so many of my buttons: mom/son, cuckholding dad, mind control amongst others! Absolutely loved it! Going to read chapter two now.

MORE!!!

I am not sure. I do like the idea of the mother's needs being satisfied by the son, but the way both mother and father were manipulated, just does not sit right with me. Don't get me wrong, it's a good tale, well written (with just a few typos). I will keep reading.

FANTASTIC story!!!!! Very hot and well written!!!! Congratulations and thanks for sharing!!!

Good job, thanks for sharing your work.

5 stars. Will Zach's deceit catch up with him in chapter 2

Not exactly a believable plot line since subliminal messaging doesn't actually work that way. From my personal point of view I think Zach should somehow get his as he is simply a manipulative little creep. Also didn't appreciate the subjugation of good old dad who simply rolled over with a happy smile on his face allowing Zach become the alpha male . . . .