All Comments on 'When One Door Closes'

An enjoyable, easy flowing story. But please, either carefully review what you write or get yourself an editor. There are so many mistakes (sometimes every second or third sentence seems to have errors) and... really! A car called an Austin Martin??? Ian Fleming would turn in his grave.

Keep up the good work though.

The previous commenter is being far too picky about the writing. Checking the author's profile, he (or she, since there is no data) has been posting only since June. This was a good effort for a newby, if indeed the author is new to writing. Overall the story line was great, but the gym lady was a little strange. I did notice, though, that the author seems to like writing strong willed women. Will this be a theme in any follow-up stories? Keep up the good work!

Needs more build up