All Comments on 'When the Ex-Ray Strikes'

Lovely story. Like it a lot. AAAAAA++++++

Would br cool if every now and then tony mentions something to her thst she realizes he would only know because he was having her watched, including phone calls, texts, emails, social media. She would know she has nothing private ever again.

Good one.

Good one.

Proactive husband

4/5

but there are still unanswered questions!

So did Josh actually have a bigger dick?

Was fucking with Josh better than fucking with Tony?

Is the money stronger than the size of the equipment?

Good tale.

Smart husband.

Like I keep saying,

it's good if the mob got your back in LW.

It work wonders not done to any normal guy.

nicely done. Not sure I would have jumped in so quickly. Maybe give her enough rope that afternoon to let her hang herself or show she had some understanding of being faithful. But when you're in love, what are you gonna do????

Not a bad story but the narrative was a little too simplistic at times and some plot points were just that points. Jenn's version of what was happening just didn't mesh with her actions, you needed to justify it better. We also don't get good insight into Josh's thoughts other than some simple sentences. Rounding up to 4*.

Not an original theme bu a well constructed story.

Great story as always from you Cindy

Another great imaginative story. Five stars

Trust but verify!!! 5/5!!

Nice reaction story. Not sure I would forgive the wife. But hey its your story. Thanks.

A good short read. Enjoyable

Love the way you gave the main character a set of genitals and the quality of fairness, sometimes missing in these stories. Well written

Good story. For a marine, Josh wasn't too bright. Every combat troop knows that the most powerful weapon in any one battle is intel.

(Yes, yes, I know that in a campaign, or a war, the most powerful weapon is logistics. I did specify "one battle.")

Good. Not great. Always helps when tne target cuck has “connections” 🤗. Jenn was a dumbshit, but maybe this incident enlighten her.

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3 ***

Really enjoyed this story. I've never understood why husbands that know something is going on with their wife aren't proactive in putting a stop to it like in this story. I'm sure a couple of the sheltered commenters will say people like Tony's friends don't exist in real life. Like I said they live in a safe sheltered little world.

Thanks for a fun story. One comment, though - the way these characters were written, despite her activities it appears that Jenn loves Tony far more than he does her. Yes, giving her a second chance (deserved in this case) showed some love on Tony's part, but from the beginning he's never shown her trust. He's never told her what he does for a living, he's hidden his considerable assets not just from the authorities but from her, etc. - he's basically kept a pair of running shoes under the bed for the entire marriage. She screwed up, yes, partially, but he's never been fully invested in the relationship.

Nice I liked it. Confronted her at the right time. I pulled all the BS out in the open.

Thank you for the awesome story.

“Not one of those massive ones you read about, but a thick eight inches…”

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Uh….”a thick 8 inches” **IS** a massive cock 😎. Probably in the upper 1/2 percentile … or even 1/4 percentile.

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Geez….

A bit soft hearted! But in the first instance acceptable.

Great story. I like the way tony was proactive. It’s a shame he makes a living by illegally laundering money. As Unassigned said, theirs is not a real marriage and she is essentially the wife of a mobster and turns a blind eye to truth. Told so well by Cindytv that it’s believable.

Loved your story

Another great LW story CindyTV!

And made me think of the Garth Brooks song, "I got friends in low places."

Good story!

5

Very entertaining story. As I was reading Tony’s narration, I imagined that it was “Big Tony” from the Simpsons speaking, with the slow cadence, careful pronunciation, and the liberal pauses between phrases. I expect to re-read it again later, but this time imagining De Niro’s voice.

Great story!!!!

Moral compass? Does he keep the magnet in his shirt pocket,pants pocket,or ?

Love these stories where they reclaim their wives. From lost and found, pawn shop,or??

Good story.

It is an good story but I would have enjoyed it more if Josh’s sister Katie had suffered a crippling accident after Josh sent Jenn that last text.

I really enjoy your stories. You are very talented. Thanks for sharing them.

Don't even think about it is a wise choice spoken by the husband and understood by the wife. Old flames need to wither away.

Looks like the one man army got a lesson concerning the real meaning of "chain of command".

There are Predators, and then there are Apex Predators.

Josh was the first.

Tony was the second.

Josh now understands completely.

He now gets that his behavior has consequences, all thanks to the chain of command

Your stories keep getting better! Thank you for your efforts!

Sad sad story. I cannot believe this weak willed but nice seaming woman had to end up with either of those sleazy creeps.

RE: Predators vs. Apex predators

A tick is an apex predator

It seems Josh doesn't follow the Marine Corp motto too well. Semper Fi

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Good tale. LP

I, for one, NEVER tolerate any DISREPSECT!

Great story!!!!!!

"A tick is an apex predator"

Only a tick would think that. The rest of nature knows the tick as a bloodsucking parasite.

I'm generally against RAAC stories, but this one passes the "OK" limit by being carefully balanced.

4 stars, but only because I feel he should have told the asswipe's parental units why the dogs disappeared and what kind of amazing parenting job they did.

Your best so far!!! 5/5

CindyTV

great story you got my 5.

remark: Not everyone has connections with big business cheaters (MOB)

Just how does the average guy like me (ex Military, ex government employee )

get the same kind of job done with a almost straying wife??

I do like your story! Thanks !!

CTV is moving up on my favored author list....

Smokepole

You are getting better and better at this genre. You earned a follower Cindy.

Good story. It's nice to have powerful friends.

Being proactive in his wife's decision to meet her old boyfriend was very successful because he cut it off immediately before she got seduced by the ex. Young people allow themselves to be seduced by the thrill and newness of things, hey don't really think things thru. Age is important between spouses. In my case there was 6 years difference, she was younger at 19. It doesn't sound lie much but it is. I was pushing 40 and she was 34. At that point the difference was much greater. Why? I was slowing down working hard she was still young and raring to go. End of marriage, I got to old. End of story. Marry someone really close to you own age especially if your younger. Good story.

Second read like it even better. short and sweet. Take control of the situation. Let the misled have a choice and reinforce the discussed ramifications with convction. You write like a leader with no compunction or fear. Bravo...

Nice.I like how Tony thinks, and lives. Well written, but it could benefit from more emotion, and more dialogue. Thanks for sharing.

*****Entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

you give inpression tony is in bed with cartel, maybe josh losing his dick will be a good reminder

Superb story and a good feeling about controlling the situation. The only element missing is the analysis of his wife’s betrayal. She needed counseling for her cheating ways.

YET ANOTHER ACE...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

All stories from this author are great.. but this one just has to be in the top ten on Literotica...ten stars!!

Great story, great author, great that I discovered you

Umm the husband having a "thick 8 inches" already puts him in the upper fraction of a percentile for volume. Average penis length is 5.5 inches (6.5 for black men). The standard deviation is very small and the distribution narrow. Without surgeries and pumps, the purported massive cock recurrent in LW stories are way, way exaggerated in frequency. For a woman to have been married to two well endowed (or even larger men) is like winning the powerball lottery. Heck in real life Peter North was 8 inches (and thick). If a wife needs more than that then she has some serious issues.

Great story! Well thought out by MC.

MC played things perfectly and was brutally logical and in control. Of course he had resources a normal guy would not have access to.

I really like the post nup, in these situations. This is the second story I have read, where this author brought it into play. You can bug the phone , and tap the emails, but it makes you seem like a Warden. Much simpler approach, is the post nup. To me, it’s like getting a suspended sentence. A guy gets a DUI, and pays a fine with a suspended sentence of one year. If he gets caught again, he serves time for both concurrently. 5 stars. keep em coming!

I liked it, your best story by far⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

2nd read, gets better wonderful way to sort out an ex lover and protect your love.

I loved it, and gave it 5 stars. Finally a story about a man with a back bone that isn't willing to share or be a cuckold. While Jenn was worried that Tony might get hurt if he fought Josh, Tony is smarter, has more money, and friends in low places that owe him favors. Jenn might have also realized how broke her and Josh would be trying to make a living, since Josh didn't have a job, and neither did she.

Writing is really improving. Believable characters, controlled. Hard for me to see why a smart guy like Tony would be in love with such an airhead. But I guess Cupid’s arrows are not always rational. Looking forward to more-you have a unique and intriguing style

Cindy hits it 100% on this one. People can always be expected, to follow what’s in their best interests. And nobody does anything for anyone, unless they want something in return. That is the harsh facts of life, I discovered years ago. If you show weakness to anyone, they will eventually use it to their advantage. The husband in this story, holds resources that most of us do not. However, you can always confront a cheater, and resist their attempts to change your relationship. You will have the moral high ground, and that’s an advantage you should never let go if. 5 stars.

I've read a few of your LW stories, you are a talented writer. Well done.

What a great story worth reading 100 times.

Merci pour cet écrit que j'adore.5*

Excellent story,and it was great to see how a real man handles something like this. I loved his take no prisoner attitude and how he was able to save her from screwing up her life. Well Done 5 Stars!!!

Wonderful story, 10 stars! I guess Josh got the message and Tony kept a loving wife and started a family. Good for Tony, Jenn, and the baby!

I think Josh deserved a little more than a warning to start. Not the dogs, but something impacting him directly.

Love your stories.

Exactly. And your wife will always try to test the boundaries. Keep giving in to the little things, and eventually you will be cut out of the loop, and she will lose respect for you. I think this story, is an example of that- 5 stars

Damn your stories are good, think ive read them all!

Bit like Aesops Fables. Each of your stories has its own moral.

Yes, the story is good and reads like an adult fairy tale. But Tony's life has changed forever and not in a good way. He will always be suspicious of her, even after kids and time together. She will eventually resent his suspicions thinking she has proved herself loyal. This will cause big problems. Why?

Because you just can't unring a bell.

Thanks for your writing.

I agree with your last statement about not tolerating disrespect. I am only a small man but I have never backed down even if it cost me a beating. They only did it once as I gave as good as I got and they found easier pray to torment. 5*****😊😊😊😊😊.

Not your usual BTB story and I loved it. Well done Tony but I'm thinking Josh got off a little too easy for trying to break up a marriage like he did. Maybe a busted knee cap, crushed teistical or missing ear, just something to remind him daily he picked the wrong person to fuck with and there's always someone out there that's badder than you are.

Good one. Shorter than most of your work. We’ll done Cindy

I wouldn't have stayed with her.

"I just figured one lunch for old times wouldn't be a big deal." - If it's just lunch, why no bra or underwear and a revealing dress?

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"I look like I was going to be with Josh sexually." - Because she was, she shouldn't lie to herself.

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"She's a grown woman and makes her own decisions." - Yes, that's just what Tony said, and if her decision is to stay with Tony, you need to respect that.

J'ai beaucoup adoré un peu trop court mais bravo l'histoire tien debout toute seule merci pour l'écriture

He would be better off with a wife he didn't have to keep tabs on all the time. It would have been interesting to see if she would revert back to Josh if he kept after her.

10 stars, Cindy! Josh got smart, fairly quickly. The things that happened with the dogs and listening to what he was told, saved his ass... Jennifer was wise not to doubt Tony, and for that, she became a mommy!

Dumb bitch Jenn got lucky!!

Good story. Well done. Her actions damaged their marriage but are forgivable able ... with time and effort. But normal people need other strategies because they don't have such resources. But hey it is fiction. And well written too!

Creative story. Of course husband has access to resources that us mere mortals do not. Note a postnup cannot cover child custody on children not yet born. At least in the USA. In some states portions of a postnup regarding custody of children already born are set aside depending on the court's decision.

Don’t fuck with a guy named Tony.

Loved it. 5 stars

Although I don't like Jenn's actions, and I would be mad af, what she did isn't a deal breaker as long as she wised up and it never happened again. But if she had kissed him, or let him touch her pussy then that would be an automatic divorce.

I like how Tony has this like borderline gangsta feel to him, or maybe something like a mafioso. Someone not to be fucked with.

I loved it, and gave it 5 stars. Tony showed he wasn't taking any crap from anyone. He warned Josh not to contact Jen in any form, but he did it anyway, resulting in his parents losing their dogs for a couple of days. Tony told him next time, he won't be as nice.

Loved It!! Another Great story!!

The moment she left without panties, which by her own suggestion I might add, the marriage was over, can't live with a wife who still have feelings for ex, you never know what she's thinking inside her, trust was broken, the MC is rich why keep a slutty wife to keep tabs around her, sure he love's her but trust was broken, he can easily replace her with someone better overtime..

cindy love your mind good job ,, got to love those mob boys

I swear, CindyTV must be related to Cubano exilados. I had a very close friend back in the 80s whose father sounded exactly like the husband here - Tony Cardone. They were an old Italian Cuban family from Oriente Province who came in under the Real Cedula de Gracias of the 19th century. "Don Garabaldino", as we honorifically called his father, was just like the Cardone character here. I dated my friend's sister - the 'Don's' daughter- for a little while, and it was like meeting a very stern and forbidding 'Godfather'. It didn't last, perhaps fortunately, since we didn't share the same politics, albeit I respected his social views. She was a right firecracker in her early 20s and ended up marrying and settling down in Charleston, SC with someone from South Florida. As I recall, it was something of an 'or else' choice like my dating her had been. We're still close friends- her brother Oreste and I- but when visiting their family events, I used to get the old 'ojo malo' from her mother still. So I went on to marry a Colombian-Cuban mix girl instead and Mariana's family gave me the same treatment until our marriage produced "nino primogenito" two years in. I was never sure whether the male relatives' mention of criadillas was a joke about enhancing my fertility power or turning me into a delicacy until then. CindyTV's stories always reminds me of this milieu.

CindyTV, Thank you for the memorable stories, and especially the ones reminding me of those years! - An old man (late 60s) in Charleston.

I think he stepped in to soon,he should have observed things, yes she might have stepped over the mark, but at least he would know for certain what sort of wife he had

It would save all the worrying he would have went through

5*****+++++!!!!!