All Comments on 'When Worlds Collide Ch. 06'

Wonderful as always

woohoo thank god he set Bill straight, he was getting a bit on my nerves.

and millie, pregnant, a bit of good news in these hard times.

wonder how aaron and jen are doing, next chapter please

Love it, love it, love it and repeat ......

I'm getting nervous about the upcoming battle ... can't wait to see what you do with it and the two couple's mating :)

What are you reading this for?? Get on with the next chapter! STOP READING THIS! :)

IT was another great chapter! I LOVED your last story and I'm really Loving this story!! STOP READING! WRITE WRITE WRITE!!! :) Please hurry with the next chapter! I want to see what happens with Jen and Lacey and Rafe etc.

AND you are still reading this why????? STOP READING IT! :)

I have to agree with IzkaPlm18 stop read and just write..chop chop..

another great read from you. Thanks so much providing such reading enjoyment.

I hope that Millie or jared doesnt die in the war now that millie is pregnant. Attacking the children and elderly would be something a visious vampire would do. Just saying..... I hope thats not the case.

Awwww so all is good in the Were Camp for 5 minutes. I thoroughly expect all hell to break loose now :) Fantastic chapter Jass we just ned more more more :)

Take Care

Sol (Groupie) xxxxxxx

Please Jaz, may we have another (chapter that is)? PLEASE!!

Yes Jaz you have me talking in scooby-doo talk!! I mean really who says wowsers!? Me thats who and its all your fault!! Phenomonal chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one!!

It was great to see Jared get tuff with Bill Shepherd and finally put him in his place, not to mention Rafe's remarks to Shepherd about giving his mate to any available vamp! LOL My family must have thought I was going even more mad then they already do when I almost cheered outloud!!! Can't wait for the next chapter to be posted! You rock Jaz!

i have said since the start of the series, the one character that is to be feared is rafe because of his nature as a human, because he will not just explode quickly. but he we explode all at once and the persons/ vampires/ whomever he unleashes it on will not have a chance, and i see something coming that not many are going to like, but it will allow for natural progression of the story. keep it up it is great

Your stories only get better and better. And the surprises at every turn keep me constantly guessing. Millie being pregnant was a great plot twist. Please keep writing more and more and more and more..... As usual, I will be looking daily for new chapters

Kate

The build up continues toward the battle!

can't wait for more!

Love it amazingly awesome

Very impressed and happy I came across your writings~ I've been reading for hours and I'm caught up like the rest of your fans! Keep it as it, don't change your style for anything! :)

Ooo, loving the buildup of tension in the story. And wow, what an unexpected but enjoyable plot twist: Mille pregnant! Don't know how I just now found this Ch. when it was posted almost a week ago, but I'm sure glad I found it. Can hardly wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds. Keep up the brilliant work, Jaz!

OK so somehow I missed this chapter when first reading...Jaz pointed it out when I later asked why she didn't put in the moment of Millie telling jarad she was pregnant...Man, and I so wanted to say she could do something better! j/k

Awesome job on the meeting and another hot love scene. Thanks jaz!

This chapter leaves nothing out.......lots of hot sex, old school Weres vs new school Weres, questioning the decision of the Alpha, Bill wanting to turn the mates over to Graves, changes in pack order, plans to fight the enemy and oh yea lots of hot sex LOL So much more happened in this chapter, it's just overflowing with action

I really liked this chapter. The way Bill finally capitulated after realizing that Jared truly is a strong leader was very well done.

Liking this very much. Seems like this story is just getting better and better. This genre is still pretty new to me, but I can see why it's getting so addictive. Got to go, much more reading to get through... LOL

he just couldn't find a normal woman for him to settle down with she had to have a homacidal vampire after her

I've just discovered the FTI saga and I am loving it. Your writing has gone from strength to strength as I go through it. Really well done. Don't stop writing. You should indeed consider publishing. I am not a crier at all (like seriously totally not a crier) and when Jared went raw there with Millie I totally shed a tear or two, and my hands went to my mouth. Keep it up Jaz!!! You have another fan to add to your list ;). PM

this isnt a criticism of your spelling but i have found that a large number of authors on literotica use drugging instead of dragging i mean do they have chloroform on their lips or something

Stuartrisk, please don't take offense but a dragging kiss makes no sense. The term "drugging kiss" does make sense because it implies the kiss gives a feeling of intense euphoria or calms nerves or distress like many drugs do. A dragging kiss, to me at least, suggeexsts that they are dragging each other around by the lips, the hilarity of the image ruins the passionate atmosphere some what. I hope you understand the use and meaning of the term now :)

And I apologize for the typeo, not sure that happened but it is meant to say 'suggests'

Beautiful chapter. Yet again my dear jaz u had me in tears. I havnt seen talent like yours in a long time. U got me on edge and totally lost in your stories. God I wish a man like the ones u write about actually existed. I can't begin to imagine having such a loving loyal man in my life. What a fantasy wish I could find a man like that. Lee writing. Beautiful job

I said it before and I'll say it again, "Jazcullen, You've got T.A.L.E.N.T.!

I'm rereading WWC and it's still top-notch. I hope you're publishing or planning to publish -- you've definitely got talent!

Ok I'm sure someone pointed this out but doesn't aaron only have 2 brothers at home? One brother is dealing with major greef vright now and isn't there for meeting?? Anyway awesome chapter glad milli is going to have. Kiids

I remember years ago I hated zombie movies ect. That is until I caught a Walking Dead marathon which showed the first five seasons back to back all week long. I was hooked. I had always felt the same way about anything Warewolf, until recently I've started reading their stories and I can't get enough of them. Your saga is my big warewolf fix for this week and I'm walking around like a zombie from lack of sleep. I have my fingers crossed that somehow you can finish Storm Shadows before I finish it's 12th chapter. My only regret is that I didn't purchase and read Fighting The Inevitable before I started enjoying the other parts to the saga here on Literotica. Thanks for the many enjoyable hours of reading your beautiful story!!!