All Comments on 'When You Know Ch. 01'

This plot has potential and greatly enjoyed reading it CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 2 please don't make me WAIT...

I hope to read further chapters, and I really enjoyed the way you set this one up. I have a minor negarive comment, and I hate people who criticize then hide behind "anonymous".

He is 24 she is 36. That is not fifteen years.

Look forward to.next part.

good writing, good job. Hope you continue.

Originally I had the age gap between them higher...15 years to be exact. I changed it, and thought I reflected it in the story to be "almost 15 years", but if it didn't come across that's my fault. I usually try and catch things like that.

Please let there be a many more chapters!

Great history.

A good beginning and a promising continuation I hope.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

@piledriver, I hate the fact that 'the members' with names that are just as anonymous as the rest of us think there can't be other opinions to what you think, and as far as I could see there was no negative criticism before your comment. Get over yourself.

Who cares about the age difference, if it was the other way around no one would say a thing. I thought this was long winded and skipped parts of it, going to try chapter 2, hopefully not as long winded as this.

It will be fun to watch the dynamics going forward.

too bad it's about fucking lawyers. they suck

then fucks him! what kind of whore is she??? he's a man whore...dumping this purely fuck story...Romance or whore house of extremely shallow animals

This way a joy to read! Realistic characters and story! 5 stars!