All Comments on 'Where No One Has Gone Before Pt. 09'

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I do not see a 7th “Plant” entry. Am I missing something?

Well done from start to finish. I hope that we’ll be reading more adventures of the captain and crew of the Enterprise. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

What else do you give the master of Lit.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️! Wonderful, looking forward to your next Tale.

@NetWhiz -- The link is in Saddletramp's profile, like he said in his notes. It's on Medium. I've read it, and enjoyed it.

Awesome I loved it 5 stars.

More to come soon I hope. A well planed and delivered space opera. Than you for the time and effort to bring us this amazing saga. 5 stars from start to finish.

Very good but for a MISS; "Sir, we have found two survivors from the Mr'rk vessel. ...looked somewhat reptilian." This prisoner was sent to the Tere. The MISS is; NO shared intelligence/condition about this prisoner?

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Also this little gem was left very vague and requires more explanation since it is on Earth, "New South Marsookia is located in the South Pacific Ocean, Commander," And appears this new island embassy is governed by traditional Gingravik, as their apparel indicates.

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I saw this Balok/Jim exchange coming plus it was in his DNA (which now needs further 'Space Force' analysis! Are there any more Space Force officers/Earthlings having this DNA. Did Space Force find any Mr'rk Earth-base/hidden space craft in our solar system? Any/all of these possibles have serious issues/influences for Earth/Space Force.

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6******, Hooyah, with many Salutes to such a gifted (warped) writer!

What a fun story. I so look forward to reading your stories. Thanks

Well done. It's a great story and sad to see it end. I hope in the future you can bring it back. You are a great writer and extremely talented.

Ssacam

I love this series, and can't wait for new chapters! Live long, and prosper, ST. 🖖A big 5 stars.

Trekkies unite !!! 🙌

We definitely need more of this! I really hope you continue this story. Thanks for writing it!

Great Series, loved the origin story of the Gingravik. Your the best SaddleTranp! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING BLAZING SUPER NOVA STARS! Thank you.

Loved to series but see that it had to shift (rather than end). Great job.

I’m trying to figure out what directions you are going it but it seems to be a more of a “Universe” of interrelated stories. Love your effort. Thank you.

Creative as hell and quite well written. 5* from me.

Great writing and plot planning. I enjoyed reading, the story flows well and seems very consistent with the related works. If you write more adventures for this bunch, I’ll certainly keep reading.

Thanks for sharing.

Hoping this series continues, really like it! ***** as always.

Great writing, loved this mini series.

Would I like to see more, hell yeah.

Let's get them introduced to more aliens.

Thankyou again

You never fail to impress, Saddletramp! I hope the story continues

Really enjoying this series ST. Please keep of the good work!

So you were plastered to the TV for every episode of ST and the various spin-offs!!!!!!??????!!!!!!! BTW, the phrase that you used "improvise, adapt, overcome" is trademarked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yep, checked on it myself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seems the studio that owns the movie rights also trademarked the slogan!!!!!!!! NO SHIT!!!!!!!! LOVED THIS SO MUCH, DIDN'T WANT YOU TO GET INTO TRADEMARK PRISON!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for ALL of this story. Well put together and interesting. Thanks for your writing.

I sure hope this is not the end of this story line it has such great potential. It has been enjoyed n appreciated.

Dear God. What a creative, imaginative mind! Story telling at its finest. Thank you.

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I am still waiting for a double cross from the Gingravik and the Drake's having to come to the rescue.

Seriously, seriously, seriously = great story, well done. And once again, this would be a great script for a terrific movie. You really do need to consider

You have an amazing mind ! What an imagination. Your stories make want to read and read and read . I have read all your works and find them all 5 star. Please keep up the great work. As one commenter said this would make a great movie

Being a sentimental old Star Treck fan,may I say-well done.

One of the best series I've ever read from you, ST, and that's saying a lot! Very well done! I can only hope the Enterprise, Bill, and Kyra will find more adventures one day!

Daamn, I love this series, well done

I absolutely loved this, one of the best things that I’ve read on here, I just wish that there was more?

Well done series. The ending leaves us wondering if there will be further adventures for the Enterprise....

Why would they bother putting tattoos on a disposable service clone?

OK. It’s ST’s universe. I get it. What is the politically correct term for a mentally retarded universe?

Sentient plants riding around on go carts with appendages adept at impregnating Earth girls???

1. Who was the first plant person able to figure out how to use his penis hands to work a socket wrench in order to build the first go cart? Or does their home planet have naturally occurring go carts? How do they lift themselves and their pots up onto their go carts? Come on! Even Lost in Space’s giant carrot people made more sense than this.

2. What evolutionary pressure caused plant people to develop penises especially suited for impregnating female inhabitants of a planted 10 light years away, at a time earth humans might not have evolved yet? Earth mammals can’t even procreate with other mammals of other species, let alone procreate with plants and yet these plant people are somehow able to knock up earth girls at will - and apparently only produce female offspring?

3. How does alien technology as sophisticated as a defense shield arrive in a tiny box and is able to be integrated wtih earth technology in a few days?

Pity that the abundant contradictions ruined a passable story.

Yawn.

Wow what a great series. Keep up the good work.

I do appreciate your stories. Thank you for sharing your many works with us.

This is one of my favorites. I am amazed at the many different story lines you have created over the years and the time it had to take to put them all to print.

You are my favorite author on here and congratulate your editors because they have done a fantastic job.

There a number of very evident contradictions here, however none sever enough to derail a very fine story. The author affords the reader to willingly suspend disbelief.

This is one of them stories I wish could go on and on! Loved it, every chapter! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS on all 9 chapters. Thanks ST, you're the best, really!

That's some good stuff right there.

Great story. Hope you are able to continue this saga.

I enjoyed this series immensly. I particulary appreciated the way the auther payed homage and respect to the tv series. I would love to see what happens to Bill, Kyra and the Enterprise in the future.