All Comments on 'While the Cat's Away'

Good story. I was almost put off when Becky made her appearance and Peter did nothing to get rid of her.

Like the character of Nikki she seems awesome.

Hope you do a follow up chapter. There's an underlying sense of a developing emotional love between Nikki and Peter and it would be good if that carried forward.

A straightforward spank story but there is enough about the brother and sister that I would like to hear more ( preferably without the condoms)

Their relationship is interesting and gets intense at times. I think Nikki really wants to screw him hard and often but isn't quite sure yet. In any case, I like the potential and hope you write more chapters very soon. Thanks.

This is screaming of part two, they fell in love, get rid of the condoms and get a baby coming, they know it is bs that baby would be any different than others.

I'm loving this story and it had me up in about two seconds. But please have someone proof read and edit. It needs it bad.

Made my dick hard as a scratching post

Good story though the grammar and spelling needs a little work.

What happens when Nikki is the one who wakes Becky up to sex? How does that happen? Maybe they plan a way for Becky to have to stay over night and sleep in Nikki's bed.

Will have all future stories edited. Thanks for all the comments.

Gold Rogue

definitely need something with Nikki getting Becky into sex with Peter. Maybe they're in the basement drinking beer, playing video games, turns into dares... ends up in a 3-way after Nikki does Peter, Becky gets into it.

Very good story with realistic dialogue. I'd like to know more about these two. Not sure about Becky joining them because brother and sister would be vulnerable. The story might take a dark turn and I would not care for that.

I wouldn't worry too much about spelling and grammar - it wasn't too bad. Of course an editor could help. Thanks for an enjoyable story! I'm hoping for a sequel.

Please??? Why, isn't she on the pill? A condom is like no sex...

Really liked the teasing and a very good ending.

Some writers do it right by not having a sequel. You're one of them.......

A MYTH. Abonomal babies of incest about 5% from almost nothing to severe mental illness. From non related couples 4.9% from almost nothing to severe mental illness. Avoid incest if there are known genetic defects in a family.