All Comments on 'Whiplash Ch. 03'

by Sanzamour

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Do you know where you are?

You chase her to your bedroom, and are throwing her on the bed in one paragraph, and in the next you "felt exhausted and fell on the sofa."

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
what ever

not even worth a fucking ace,,, they really need to add fucking minus stars for garbage like this

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
sucka!

nuff said

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If you are looking for stylistic prose and meticulous plotlines, Sanzamour probably isn't your cup of tea. I have one mood horny AF, when that boils over, it usually ends up in print somewhere. I do plan on adding more to this collection and would appreciate you coming along f...

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