All Comments on 'White Freshman, Black Coeds Ch. 13'

Another fine chapter Mr. Livingston.

Great twist to a good tale. Keep it up.

Thank you both, I'm glad you liked it. This was a funny one because I had the dominatrix idea and was just going to let it go that way in the 'normal' fashion, but as I wrote it Mark took over and changed the power dynamic, because he wasn't going to be able to live with if it had ended the original way. I like it better this way. But he'll meet Capri again, and they'll explore in a more positive way some of the paths she was planning to take him down.

Thanks again.

Wow! That, I did not see coming.

@Knightofmind: Lol, I didn't either when I started writing it. Usually I have just the barest framework of an idea, and when I start writing it, the characters take over. I can't tell if you liked it or not, but if you *didn't*: blame it on the characters (not me) going that way!