All Comments on 'White Freshman, Black Coeds Ch. 16'

I enjoy your writing and story lines. The innocence of the characters and how they evolve is so vivid. Please continue write and entertain us.

Thank you so much! I realize these stories aren't for everyone, and maybe aren't even a great fit for Literotica, but this is the only place I know of to get my story out and get feedback like this. When the idea came to me I couldn't NOT write it. Then when I finished with Mark and Nia at the hotel with Rita in Chapters 7 through 11 I thought I should just end it there. Because that had turned out to be so wholesome and tender to me, almost pure (given the circumstances), and I didn't want anything to sully that. But an earlier comment changed my mind, and now yours has validated that there are some people out there who are appreciating this.

So thanks!