by Samuelx
Two submissions. Lucky me. Two good laughs in one morning.
So bad it makes me want to puke collard greens thru my nose.
You have really good ideas, but you have to work on stucture, dialogue, and setting. The best stories make a pussy wet without even a touch...yours don't do that. I'd really like someone...not you...to write an interacial or all black story that is both hot and well written.
Beautiful so many kinky things in my head reading this. Like how Clarence Thomas is only a pawn for his superior white wife. It bad but a really hot turning knowing she dominates him making him rule in what ever way she wants. I imagine her standing over him . Looking down at him. Making him eat her as she tells him how he will vote for or against.