All Comments on 'Who Killed Cupid?'

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cantfightfatecantfightfateover 15 years ago
A bit cheesy for my taste,

but still enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
A good piece of work!

Classic work by none other our own DK! I'd lik to see a follow up on this tale, but I'd rather see follow ups on the 'A Tiger's Love' soon! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Thanks for reposting!

Awesome story!

msjay123msjay123over 15 years ago
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!

Your work is always fantastic and you didn't dissapoint!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wow!!!

Then add all the other superlatives in the dictionary!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice

I like the characters, but I'd like to see Kate slightly less aggressive and Jake slightly less submissive, so they'd feel a little more like a team on the job, if not in their personal lives. Being a secondary on a case shouldn't mean that Jake has to so often sit there and say/do nothing, and being the primary doesn't mean that Kate should obliterate him. I don't feel like I can give this 100 because, as a police procedural, I think it's got 2 flaws: 1) by allowing the mayor & family to stay in the house, they compromised the crime scene to the point where any evidence found there might be inadmissible in court, and 2) COD, tox screen, etc., usually take longer - a lot longer, in some systems - but I could buy that they were rushed through because of the high-profile nature of the case. Nevertheless, as an erotic story, it's a fun read. You, young lady, are very good. :)

dairetodairetoalmost 11 years ago
yay

A finished story.

loved it

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
I liked it a lot.

Good story.

I liked it, a love story in key thriller, with a promising end, especially if the author writes a sequel someday.

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
great story

lots of action and humor. fully enjoyed!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great stuff 5stars

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