All Comments on 'Whoopsie!'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Short but very sweet!

A most enjoyable, if short story. You should consider expanding it into something we can 'get our teeth into' a bit more. It is well worth it. Thank you - four stars (five, had it been longer).

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Would have been 5 stars if it were written in first person. Thx

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