by fronker
I read all 9 chapters in one sitting and am definitely looking forward to more. You're a very talented writer.
How did the other commentator get through all nine chapters in one sitting? I can't get through one chapter without needing time to recover.
Terrific writing and pacing. There must be lots more training and specialties awaiting with all sorts of services to render and enjoy.
We're all waiting...
Fonker has done it again. Whore94 is not pornographic writing, it is an erotic work of art.. Fonker has captured the very soul of what it is like to be initiated into becoming a whore. That angst that Elizabeth feels is a perfect window into the mind of girl who is being transitioned into becoming a item of property to be used to produce profits for her owners. She is still in denial and does not realize what her fate is and what she will become. She both loves and hates what is being done to her. Fonker is creating a classic work here and I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
keep writing....please keep writing!
Whore 94's commentary throughout the story is a fun read. Please continue with the smart girl gone dum story.