All Comments on 'Why I Hated The Guy From The FBI Ch. 02'

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tomscards almost 9 years ago

good

I am going back and re-reading all of your stories while I await on the next posting of "There Must be a Mistake".

READ DYCKE AND PAYNE IN THREE DAYS TIME AND THE FIRST TWO CHAPTERS OF THIS ONE TODAY.

GET WELL, AND START WRITING AGAIN.

TOM

bruce22 over 8 years ago

Well Structured Tale

Though there are quite a few small spelling errors it seems to me that the plotting and dialogue could be applied commercially.

Anonymousover 8 years ago

A very enjoyable story.

The person who has the biggest reason to hate the FBI is Frank.They have placed him in the worst moral dilemma a person can face.

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