by Snekguy
Well...
With the design of the arachne... you went slighly to the side which I don't like, but not too much.
She was a snidge too gentle for what she is, in my "very expert opinion".
How ever... Can I give 6th and 7th star from somewhere? as I absolutely love the story.
As Jova82 perfectly phrased
Can I give 6th and 7th star from somewhere? as I absolutely love the story.
Well wriiten, great plot, perfect ending
It is good to see that you’re still around and is posting here, lovely story, a bit on the romantic side for a arachnid but good never the less, so looking forward to your pinwheel story, thanks for sharing.
As someone with a deep seated fear of spiders, I was worried that I'd get nothing out of this story. I can safely say I fear spider just a little less now. Great story, my dude.
As an arachnaphobe I was really unsettled midpoint when Moira revealed herself but enjoyed the eroticism of their coupling.
As a side point was she based of one the three Greek fates, the Moirai?
Yes! It's always a treasure to see you've posted again. This one didn't do much for me, but I always admire the writing quality nonetheless. You're very skilled at the pacing of a story, including the erotic scenes.
I can't wait for the huge trilogy!
I need to confess that I am a bit disappointed...that I am only able to give you a 5 rating when I would like to give you a 10! Outstanding storytelling as per the usual from you. :)
Enjoyed this story, What a way to go! Would love to meet a Moira, Good work author
Thought the ending was a little rushed but it was a good way of tieing things toether.
It looks like you guys won me another competition! Thank you for the nomination, and for everyone who voted and rated the story. You guys are always rewarding me for posting my content here.
Interestingly, it was actually a tie this time, so be sure to go check out Afloat in the Dark by Ovidiy if you're looking for more spooky erotic horror.
I loved the way you made the alien into the erotic, coupled with breathing new life into the gothic standby of car accident and lonely mansion. I'd have paid to read this in a short story collection