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ender2k2kender2k2kover 2 years ago

That was a lot of fun. Thanks

jkthekatjkthekatover 2 years ago

A winner for sure!

Guest238Guest238over 2 years ago

Fantastic story! Well done!

JOVA82JOVA82over 2 years ago

Well...

With the design of the arachne... you went slighly to the side which I don't like, but not too much.

She was a snidge too gentle for what she is, in my "very expert opinion".

How ever... Can I give 6th and 7th star from somewhere? as I absolutely love the story.

kees10kees10over 2 years ago

As Jova82 perfectly phrased

Can I give 6th and 7th star from somewhere? as I absolutely love the story.

Well wriiten, great plot, perfect ending

RamazaRamazaover 2 years ago

It is good to see that you’re still around and is posting here, lovely story, a bit on the romantic side for a arachnid but good never the less, so looking forward to your pinwheel story, thanks for sharing.

uniderpuniderpover 2 years ago

As someone with a deep seated fear of spiders, I was worried that I'd get nothing out of this story. I can safely say I fear spider just a little less now. Great story, my dude.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

As an arachnaphobe I was really unsettled midpoint when Moira revealed herself but enjoyed the eroticism of their coupling.

As a side point was she based of one the three Greek fates, the Moirai?

abiostudent3abiostudent3over 2 years ago

Yes! It's always a treasure to see you've posted again. This one didn't do much for me, but I always admire the writing quality nonetheless. You're very skilled at the pacing of a story, including the erotic scenes.

I can't wait for the huge trilogy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I need to confess that I am a bit disappointed...that I am only able to give you a 5 rating when I would like to give you a 10! Outstanding storytelling as per the usual from you. :)

JohnSpanglerJohnSpanglerover 2 years ago

Thank you for giving us such a great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. Glad for the happy ending for the Bronco and couple.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is by far the best story i have read on literotica. Keep it up.

nitram5nitram5about 2 years ago

This story should definitely get another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Enjoyed this story, What a way to go! Would love to meet a Moira, Good work author

SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 2 years ago

Spooky und Romantique!

11/10 Bottles of Château Pétrus!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

One of the best stories released on here. I hope a chapter 2 is in works.

Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

Thought the ending was a little rushed but it was a good way of tieing things toether.

SnekguySnekguyalmost 2 years agoAuthor

It looks like you guys won me another competition! Thank you for the nomination, and for everyone who voted and rated the story. You guys are always rewarding me for posting my content here.

Interestingly, it was actually a tie this time, so be sure to go check out Afloat in the Dark by Ovidiy if you're looking for more spooky erotic horror.

mlgm5mlgm5over 1 year ago

That us how you write erotica for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great erotic story- very well plotted and good descriptions

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I loved the way you made the alien into the erotic, coupled with breathing new life into the gothic standby of car accident and lonely mansion. I'd have paid to read this in a short story collection

FigjamkissFigjamkiss9 months ago

Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing.

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