All Comments on 'Wife Swap'

So much for fidelity. When the slob fucks his wife, he will get what he deserves.

He is in for a surprise, he got to fuck Jan because Heather has already fucked the slob.

This story has no plot, no drama, no point. Its just a passionless recounting of what happened one day in the neighbor's kitchen. One question though. Why do they have a dresser in their kitchen? Real well thought out story. Guess its difficult to type with one hand while masturbating with the other? Hope it was good for you.

Not exactly plausible, but very enjoyable. I hope you do a Part 2 and we get a description of the wives being spanked.

This did not work for me, no credibility to the characters but thanks for the effort. I see Mr Ignorant is out again, if he cares to contact me I will explain the item of furniture, "dresser", that is seldom found in a kitchen these days.

Just a funny story...With not credible characters, more like a fantasy, where we can imagine any scenario, impossible or not...2*

I liked it!

Another great tale from the inimitable Ashson! @Sugna (and others) ... Ashson's Sweetie has TOO much class to boff a slob! Ashson (or Ashson's Monster) would NOT marry a woman unworthy of his chutzpah, spontaneity, and awareness! NO slobs (even well-hung ones) in THAT pussy!*

I was kinda surprised that Sweetie was not (as retribution for putting Hubby on the spot ... poor guy) made responsible for the cream-pie clean-up of Cutie's Coochie! (Yet another 'first' - maybe for each)

* I suspect (but have no written evidence) that Ashson's Monster is an egaliarian hubby with respect to his Sweetie's opportunities!

The most disappointing Literotica stories are those that start well, but are way too brief to convey any feeling of eroticism - this bucks the trend, as even in such a small compass, it has some humour as well a decent fuck. I would be nice to have a sequel, as half-promised.

Great read as usual.

Very good read, flowed nicely, and ended with ones imagination going in a positve direction

You left too many plot holes: 1) No mention that Heather was on the pill; 2) No assurance that Jan doesn't have to have Heather's hubby to make things "even" between the couples; 3) Why wasn't hubby very inquisitive about why Jan wanted this and was not troubled by it, e.g. is she having or has had an affair that she has not disclosed ? 4) Given that hubby was just asked about a wife swap, why wasn't he questioning whether the girls had secretly agreed to it?

Also, shouldn't "wretches" be "wenches?"

Who the hell is Paul

But probably Humour and Satire.

Fuck off and die.

gave it a 5.

Random sex just for the hell of it when your married, not my thing.

Not bad, but far too short and has little build-up to the action.

And who the devil is this Paul he mentions?

To those confused about Paul: Paul is the guy telling the story.

The ladies have arranged the swap, his wife has already fucked the neighbour that is how Jan became available for him.

I had a very similar thing. Our neighbors were married only a short time. They were inexperienced sexually. We talked and agreed to do a full swap. My wife did not enjoy her time with Antonio. He simply used her to get off. I enjoyed my time with Carmela. I only wish her personal hygine was better. More!!!

No more, ever. This is one author that I would like to meet in person. He's probably a 6'7" , 320 pound offensive lineman from the Raiders who writes during the off season.

And then he woke in the shower and it was all a dream (older readers will get it!).

HOT HOT HOT is therwe a part 2

What happens next????

Next installment please!