All Comments on 'Wife's Neglected Sister'

part two ? and when his wife comes back from her trip ... more possibilities :)

Well that was hot. When does the wife return? 😈😈😈

The story overall was good. The buildup, the dialog, it was good. But when it came to the sex, it was very short. I know you said there would be other parts but you spent the time to build it up, just to kind of rush it at the end. Keep at it and I look forward to reading more

Nothing beats the hot SIL story. Looking forward to more.

And when she turns up pregnant?

This started amazingly and then fizzled - like his cock after shooting his load.

Not bad at all think you should continue with when the wife gets home and see what develops!!

That was hot as hell. Part two please.

Good premise.

But too fast with the sex. It starts too fast. It continues too fast. It ends too fast.

Needs more slowness. Needs some reluctance by one or the other that needed to be overcome. Needs more details. Needs dialog during the step-by-step progression.

Had real possibilities. Didn't deliver.

Three stars.

With wife telling him sister had a need that the sister needed to tell him: was he set up or is he going to be caught in a trap when wife comes home early from the fake business trip?

Is plan between sisters to get her pregnant? What happens when she gets home pregnant and hasn't had sex with husband in 2 years?

No story lead in to get this started or discussion of sisters to plan futures. Definitely need the fallout chapters

Now this is a great storyline that really needs an additional chapter. So many questions, did the sisters conspire to have Dan get Becks pregnant. If Dan gets Beck pregnant then how is that going to ring with her husband. Well written and definitely needs more. Well done. 5/5

HOT! FIVE STARS!

great first part, time for wife to come back and join in threesome. then start thinking of baby names for sister. and maybe a way to get her husband to fuck her at least one more time to explain her pregnancy..

Great story. It does cry out for another chapter, please..

Good so far but where are the following chapters as promised?

Seriously, No more chapters?

His sister in law should go home with a baby bump.

The hot lusty sister in law is a good topic, but To me it would be better if the characters in these stories could cheat on their spouses without having to be high on pot. Otherwise, a good story.