All Comments on 'Wife's Niece Kalie Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

too short

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Getting better

Yes I agree too short I wanted more, but isn't that the point of a multipart story exciting the reader keeping them wanting more.

I've read all three parts and the story has done just that for me I am wanting more thinking where does he take this from here.

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