by vanalas
Angelo is the most unpleasant bastard I have ever seen, but no one deserves to be betrayed by his spouse and friend like that.
I knew it van..i knew that that fucking Vomit of Gabriel is not agood person..i knew it,That moron.....For sure van ever since u started writing right frm D.L,i've never had anegative attitude towards the main characters shown in the introduction ...but for Gabriel it was different..I hated this disaster right frm the beginning i saw him covering Angel's eyes which means He is NOT THE STAR..what hurts me is that he...he..has sex with Angel where he uses his dirty,rusted dick that he uses in that toilet...yuck j..ack
I've never hated any negative person like i do hate these sluts...If i would enter in the series i swear i wud slaughter all of them...And van u have the guts to ask if Angel deserve it??? he's done nothing van..He treats them well but those two beasts are fucking cowardy betrayers...And i knew it,the way that jack pretended not to date that he was upto something....OnA..A..Angel's bed???Jack with Gabriel!!!!!!????Haa
and thats why he's attempting to kill Angel!!!??..Trust me these two toilets wana kill Angel...Why does Angel persistantly get sick????..why doesnt huh,yuck..Gabriel want Angel to goto work...Oh that stinking pit wants to attract workers' attention to like him most???Huh..let him die in hell and....God i hate jack SO SO INFINITLY MUCH
why is that doctor afriend to that vomit???..huh really, these guys have the nerves....but any way they have messed with abitter-sour fruit...oh think of it....Angel has aCCTV camera u remember on lambert???..hahahahahaha they are DEAD
I wish he really ashames them..i hope he punishes them in the most horrible way...but..how will he survive??i wish he gets another doctor..Alicia,i hope she plans agood remedy.Though she's treated badly
gabriel and.....the so called childhood friend..fuck am gona call them vomits...Die horribly u miserable vomits...I hate every thin concerning them...Now i hate them for areason.My instincts ar right...Morons.Die stinking
Now vanalas bring the real man in the next chapter..i wana see the actual man who owns Angel..Aman of his dreams..I kno Angel is gona become wild after finding out the truth..But bring the actual guy,the one we vanaholics are waiting for
make him amain character..Dont dare think that u'l put him just briefly..Make them stronger together and fight this battle
am not scared of whr we ar going but am just ready for the real action which has sprung from this chapter...Huh it has begun,REAL ACTION
Angel is agood person and i love him so much van..Am waiting for the real guy in this coming chapter...And plz my king plz promise us that u'l post 2moro..no lies
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what is coming,i wish the vomits death
Oh sweet van..U've given us the theme songs..YE SIR.i cant add any theme song when my master has given it...Post 2moro my king himself/crowned king of writers..Mwaaaah i LOVE U
THANKS TO THE TRUTH AM GONNA HATE THOSE FOOLS FOREVER...BUT HOW WILL ANGELO REACT??????????????????????????????????????
those cartoons....I wish Angelo's dream man to be amongst friends of...of huh,gabriel...I want him to exprience that pain too
I HATE THEM..I FOR HELL'S SAKE HATE THEM..VOMITS,PUS..PIG BLOOD
i have this feeling that Gabriel and the doctor wants to kill his husband in other to take over the company. I now think that the reason he wants to change his husband surname to his own was because it would give him legal right to take over the companies.
I also think that maybe Gabriel knows about the death of Adrian parents. using Love and marriage to trap Adrian.
I just hope Adrian quickly recovers from his heartbeat when the truth is revealed and finds out who have been serving him a slow poison.
maybe two can play the game after all, Adrian is a very wise man.
I can't wait to see the look on Gabriel when knows that Adrian had known about his plans for a long time..
I have so much to do but I always end up binge reading your stuff. Kids are getting TV dinners again because I'm really wrapped up in this now lol
This story is taking me forever to get through. I honestly don't know if I can make it to the end. Feels like it's been written by an adolescent
Just read the first sentence of every paragraph, you'll get the jist of the very much looking drawn out horrible story. Damn this is painful to read
Oh for God's sake. I've read a lot of really bad stories on here but this is the worst