All Comments on 'Wild Flower Ch. 17'

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josranvictorjosranvictorabout 6 years ago
NO VAN U JUST CANT DO THIS TO US....NOT AGAIN VANALAS PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

I starte hating Brandon in the first scene he appeared in Miguel's office and that word 'he is acorrupt lawyer' fully described it that he would betray us.....But i didnt think that he would stoop so low..Yes i didnt lyk pablo for his behaviour but to an extent he is under the influence of his neighbours who claim land taking by LA DON..and besides,our hunk's uncle doesnt have to die..Death is really big to him and ..King van why the hell did Miguel have to come first in all people that were in the site??? why wasnt peter the first to come out??? no no Van no,not again...Plz dont seperate our couple..Why the hell did Chris come first in all the people that were outside?? God i wish he gets asecond thought and doesnt blame Miguel...God have mercy but that is not fair..And why did carter have to call Chris first? Why..our love has been previously mended but just look now...Fuck man,fuck

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 6 years ago

thanks to that fool Brandon..and what husts me is miguel trust him so much....Fuck what kind of love is that when u try to force it?? am even conq sure that he is among the rapists...may God protect our chriguell lives because brandon is capable of killing....That damn vomit plus that ugly bitch marcus with that stinking ass...Fuck them all stupid........Now look at this foolet Hector,he thinks pretending that he's strong will save him?? hehehe may be thinks Antonio was not aman...Hehe heck those millitary tactics,the dont work on Miguel and since he is so fond of vomiting nosense,i want him to suffer alot...that cheap rapist,Die in hell motherfucker...Carter will not take away our man,never..I know he'll try but he is ugly compared to Angel so let him quit,actually i wanted him out so that he can leave us alone but due to Alicia,man i want him to stay becoz the woman struggled to find him...For Alejandro,huu let me sit and watch

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 6 years ago

how did u see that hot love making scene??? hehehe that deep fuck scene in the bathroom,i wanted to feel it but.....Hahah at first i thought marcus was not Chris ex but when Chris said it himself i confirmed..And am sure Chris couldnt stan that ugly face though they had their issues am sure Chris cant turn to him again and...Let him die soon before he contaminates us......I wanted it,i loved it when Angel slapped Chris,man the guy was becoming ataboo,just those

words hurt me too and i waited for that....whats with Brian??? the felix i cant get it....I cant take it anymore i want felix down and that Hector and Brandon...We wont get peace if those 3 are alive..Oh hell no there is gabriel and jack and for them...................I WISH WISH TO SEE THEIR HEADS ON APLATE

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 6 years ago

Today i fasted the whole day for u my darling,i hope u like it...I cant wait for the 18th chapter but am kinda scared becoz our rivals are gradually increasing...First it was pablo,the neighbour hood,now it will be Brandon and marcus??? fuck i hate Brandon..Die in hell...I love u my love and to that allow me to rank u again as my LA DON

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Seriously!

Did I just read that the story is coming to an end? Why vanalas? This is like the best story ever.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
looking forward

Just post when you are free since it's a never show

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Simply one of the best

I don't like this story. I love it so much that I can't get enough. I love it when LA don strikes. I can't wait to see that hector go down for real. I know enemies are multiplying but hey, I trust miguel and Chris better not disappoint me!

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