by m_storyman_x
I really don't like Jennifer's whole vibe. She pushed for them to do the stripping bullshit,but then was mad about it. She's fucked several dudes and told her husband she planned on more during auditions, but she gets upset at him for the same. Then she gives permission for girls to fuck him. If I was him I would send her away, start the separation/divorce it's never going to work and seeing dudes constantly banging your woman while they are your damn employees! I'd fire any one of them that tried to seduce her, even though I KNOW that's a dickish move. My ego couldn't take these douchey 20 something meatheads cuckolding me at my place of business, no matter how wrong or hypocritical I was being. I would totally throw my weight around to get the place aberrating at my vector.
I love the series and gave it five stars and a favorite point. However, given the time span between chapters two and three, I had to re-read the series again to figure out what was going on and who was who. And honestly, I thought the sex in the first two chapters was hotter than in the third chapter.
She was not expecting to get fucked on stage, what happened to the consensual only rule? Or the condom rule? No I would not enjoy being surprised by a shaved pussy, love the all-natural look of a bush. Thomas - Andrew - Thomas? Lost a point but still enjoyed the story.
Is Jennifer going to be the tension point throughout this? I don't mind either way.
I mirror what Buzz said. Jennifer is killing this for me. Her reactions are bi-polar. The husband is being serious and considering. She’s just being a bitch. Still well written, but it’s getting harder to tolerate the wife.
Another Wonderful Hot Erotic chapter to this story! Thank you an Jennifer missed out on an opportunity to see what the business is like. David now understands it’s fun but lots of HARD work. Thank You and looking forward to reading chapter 4.
Page two, I noticed a typo a couple times where what should have been Thomas was referred to as Andrew.... But i still love the overall story arc.
Okay...wait a minute...is Jennifer fucking Andrew???!!! Or Thomas???!!! You really messed up with this little faux pas, and brought the score here to a three. I have tried to overlook all the mistakes in this, and the other stories...but...
Gonna read chapter 4...still, jaded now...????🤨🤨🥴🥴😵💫😵💫😳😳