All Comments on 'Wilderwood Ch. 03'

Love it. Excellent writing. Smart and witty.

If you took the incest out, these characters and this town could be the foundation of a mainstream novel. The potential is there to make something unique and wildly popular. (I want a cut if you write a bestseller 😁).

I'm liking the storyline, so far it's been subtle and flows smoothly, just curious if you plan to add a major conflic for them to deal with at some point, otherwise it might dull out, 5/5 so far, keep it up

FANTASTIC STORY

Love the GOTH LIFE for those pieces of pussy

Can't wait for the next EPISODE.

I got to the end of chapter 3 wanting more, right away. You've got me hooked! Thanks, I'm enjoying your style and the way you handle the dialog - nothing phony or stiff or formal.

That poor bastard, going to Wilderwood when the woman he loves is upstate where they could f like bunnies. The next one will be interesting! Yup I have really liked this story so far.

God I wish I were Emma's brother

A really good story, well worth 5/5

Better than the second installment which in itself was better than the first. I'm really enjoying the humor laced throughout this one. 🤣

The roll call, Dad, Mom, Sis, then "The bunny growls at me." I totally lost it. Truly a ROFLMAO moment. My gut was killing me as I gasped for oxygen!!! There were plenty of other great laugh out loud moments besides that one, but it was my favorite. I pictured the bunny from The Secret Lives of Pets on her Tee Shirt 👕.

I also really loved the scene when The Coven stopped in for a chat. Lauren giving E.B.the parting hug in front of his peeps was the icing on the cake. I also loved the conversation at the kitchen sink when Emma declared her commitment to him. Awesome stuff that totally redeemed the disappointment that I had in the first installment.

LicenSe

No one is two words

So awesome to have sex with a girl that's prob been with hundreds. Yep.