All Comments on 'Willing Subject'

This story was smokin' hot. You could write an infinite number of sequels and I'd want to read them all. In any case, please keep entertaining us readers with all of your stories.

the dialogue was so structured that it drew me out of the story

Incest is taboo! This story certainly wasn't. The dialogue was hilarious.

The overall idea of the story was stimulating but, there was hardly any skill in the writing. The story brought to mind a monkey trying to perform brain surgery with a pipe wrench. Please try to remember that this is EROTICA, not a porn clip.

Loosen up on your writing style. People don't talk with each other the way you have written. Use contractions (e.g., We've, I've, ...) and ask yourself whether you hear people actually talk this way.

The writing was a little juvenile or sophomoric, which made the story a little jerky.I do think that the author has passion about writing erotic literature, and just needs to polish the work a little more. I suggest that the author reads what is written and see if it sounds like it is real people talking, if it doesn't sound real, fix it. I gave the post 100% because I liked the theme, and how the author was trying to get the feelings of love into his story. thinking and writing about illicit sex is always the best. Thanks ....Rich

Gee, I thought this was a story/fantasy site......Ignore self righteous idiots...........

Moms and sons fucking stories are THE best.........more please.........

lOVE IT , WOULD LOVE PART 2

That was a nice story between mother and son having fun and getting to know each other and then adding her sister to the story may even hotter. It would be nice to see a second chapter with the aunt, mother and son having fun together.

Bro,it's the hottest story i have read in a long time.Thank you for the story.

Would love to read more of this escapade!

YES,YES,YES! 5 stars

Just another hey-wanna-fuck-hmmm-ok-why-not type story. I'm going to throw a new word at you "BUILDUP", have you heard of it?

I don't know who 'Anonymous' is but he's very quick with his negative comments. I have to ask the question, "what kind of story could he produce?". Unless you can write a better story I suggest that you keep your mouth shut. The writers on Literotica are, at least, giving us their best efforts. Your offering, should there ever be one, would most likely be 'rubbish'.

SeeThru57....keep up the good work and ignore his bullshit.

And as a reminder, these stories are fiction and not fact!

NICE JOB, LIKE TO SEE MORE OF THIS STORY. IT FOLLOWS THE SAME PATTERN AS OTHER PHOTO SHOOT STORIES. BUT IT HAS A TWIST, SISTER WHO IS ALSO VERY HOT. I THINK THIS BOY COULD NOT HANDLE MORE THEN ONE MORE LONG CHAPTER PLEASE ONE MORE CHAPTER. LAROC OF AGES

I liked it. Not a fan of the lesbian though. It's got the same relentless speed of Date Night :The Carnival, another rocker.

Let the world see the mothers face as the son fucks

Her arse. Hot.

Hot fucking story. I love mom/son threesomes!!

Nothing better than fucking your mother and her sister. It is truly the best loving possible. Thank for a great story.

What a couple, no three scum of the earth people. you couldn't beg me to fuck the two diseased sluts. jeez they probably had every disease in the book and a couple in no book!

I enjoyed this story it is what happens when you dare to fantasize about family.

Mother's don't call their son,"son."

… even though the mom and her sister were both much too easy! Thanx for the Read.