All Comments on 'Willing Wife'

by Ashson

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Just sleazy

A douche fucking a slut. Not even hot, just kind of boring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
1*

cuck shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
i see you had

stopped writing and with this effort please stop again.

Alberta  AlAlberta Alover 7 years ago
Fuckwits

You sure seem to attract them.

Another nice short story. Keep them coming.

ReedRichardsReedRichardsover 7 years ago
One would think that . . .

. . . if Anon didn't like your stuff, he wouldn't bother with reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
re: Fuckwits

He sure can, it attracted you didn't it? 1*

Ray DarioRay Darioover 7 years ago
Good Story

Thank you for sharing this story with us. It was well written, paced well, and fun to read.

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not to shabby

Which is a pkeasent change from your usual drek.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 7 years ago
A Frothy Bit of Business and Fantasy

Much like Barbara's bodice, this story was nigh overflowing with verve, abandon and èlan. I thank the author for the micro-escape from the day's cares and concerns.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 7 years ago
Hmmmmm!

A potted orchid? Possible, but I would think few flower-mongers prepare them that way, since almost all commercial orchids are epiphytes.

Good to see that Ashson's randy hero finally got rudely accosted himself. But Randy Hero seems to have coped as well as his own previous accostees did!!

Trouble is, the tension generated by a nubile young lady facing such a decision (will she? or won't she?) creates much more drama than this role reversal!

4*. plus, the Title SUX!

impo_61impo_61over 7 years ago
All this story just arose a question...

All this story just arose a question: Why a man having a whore like her as a wife would had his Company pass through a bad spot? Using her a corporate whore would make his company always on top...1*

tazz317tazz317over 7 years ago
THINK AHEAD...PLAN AHEAD

and don't forget the flowers and chocolates, TK U MLJ LV NV

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

An Aston story without a rape?

iameaseliameaselabout 2 years ago

Lordy lordy we have a great example of how someone can take feces and turn it into barely readable literary shit.

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