All Comments on 'Willow'

I have always enjoyed your stories and this is no exception. I'll re-read this one several times.

Thanks for your efforts.

J.

A brilliant story with a wonderful ending

A great story that exemplifies what romance is. Please continue to write more great stories.

Such a wonderful plethora of emotions.

A good start to my day.

Thank you.

this story is wonderful, romantic and passionate. i felt for this couple as i read on into your story. when Willow left him i felt it in my heart. whenthey met up again i felt the passion they still had for each other and had little itters in my hear. this story woke me up and made me realize how precious love is when you find that special someone that rips at your heart and you can't bare to think of another. Fran

with an engaging couple we find ourselves rooting for. Great surprises abound, and a sweet, happy ending tops it all off. Loved it!

Thank you for giving us characters that understand and embody passion and commitment. This was a wonderful story.

Moondrift -- As someone from Canada has said, you've given a marvelous start to my day. I can now go out and enjoy the morning dew and smile a bit. More stories of this ilk and caliber would be welcome. You and Rabbitrunner seem to have a gift for conveying, through the printed word, that which I believe the majority of the people of this world carry in their character: responsibility, righteousness, and the ability to forge ahead after the many human screw-ups we manage to inflict on ourselves. I look forward to more from you. Prof. Ramstein

I don't think there's much more I can say. Thanks for sharing with us :)

What a nice introduction to your writing. I'm looking forward to getting better acquainted.

SOO GOOD

I loved every bit of it. Thanks

As always - superb!

Nice but strange.. seemed like a very stupid thing of her to get pregnant firstly, and even stranger to run away like that.. But still nice and perhaps just a little bit 'gushy' :) Yoron

Strange but wonderful and oringinal.

Thank you so much for a real quality submission. It was definitely a 5 Star effort!

So far I've not read a poor, or even a mediocre, piece by you. Thanks for another lovely tale.

but I don't like it when the woman gets pregnant and walks out of the guys life...he has missed the years of his child growing up and they can never be replaced...but - thankfully - they found each other again by chance - but then had they not met again he would never have known about his child and the story would have been totally different....thankfully they did meet - got back together and raised a good family.....but it is amazing just how perceptive a child can be even at an early age as was shown when the older child knew they had been sleeping together when they thought they had been careful....you just never know......a grat story of love found and lost and then found again...loved it......

A nice story that turned out well for all concerned. This is the second time I have read it and as I stated about another story by this author, I plan to read it again in the future.

One of the most enjoyable story I have read on this site. Thanks for sharing.

young love found, lost, and reunited.

Of the lot Ann, was the sharpest.

and a very good read...quite believable too...just one thing...in most, if not all of your stories the men are always made out to be bumbling brainless fools...WHY???? not one of them was positive and sure of what they were doing...is this a reflection on yourself?????

A great story. Some of the sensations described have brought me memories of my youth, some good, many not so much.

I know that men are used to being immature in our relationships with women, but it is also not fair that a woman's excess of responsibility deprives a father of his son's childhood and growth. In life there are more options aside from estrangement for man to achieve his goals, perhaps these goals are not what the woman imagines.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

I was very fascinated by your character development and plot lines thank you. When I first started reading your Tails I assumed you were a woman. After reading your biography man was I wrong. You're very eloquent and descriptive and your words paint a visual picture that I enjoy immensely. I've reread yours tails and am very impressed with your writing abilities. Thank you

Could not finish your story.

Wonderful story and you don't always find love in your own age group...

All the needs to be said!

You have portrayed the heart of a young man in love with an older, more sophisticated woman very well. The feelings of insecurity, inadequacy and sometimes jealousy that come with it are far too real.

Willow is an intriguing woman, soft and fragile in some ways, stoic and resilient in others. I understand her not wanting to ruin Ross's life, but I think she may have miscalculated in her desperation to protect him. He would not have had to drop out of college and take up a job upon becoming a father, because Willow is quite well-to-do and could support herself and her daughters while Ross finished up his studies. Perhaps the heartbreak could have been avoided and he would not have missed out on the first few years of his daughter's life. But of course, we all sometimes do things that do not always make sense when it comes to the well being of our loved ones.

It's a beautiful story. Thanks for posting!