All Comments on 'Windfall'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What a wonderful, creative, delightful story!

Loved the concept. Loved the action. Loved the pleasure-giving and receiving. Thank you for a 5-star winner!

FieroGT1988FieroGT1988about 6 years ago
This would fit well in Erotic Horror as well.

well done

44chicken44chickenabout 6 years ago
Interesting story

Thank you. I really enjoyed it, but was left feeling that it was unfinished. It seems like an outline of a great story, a tantalizing tease of something deeper. Your writing is wonderful, I just wanted more.

CWillCCWillCabout 6 years ago
Spores in Hollywood

could be the basis of an epic, video, indi, mind shift.

Saphic_succubusSaphic_succubusabout 6 years ago
nice

another jukebox hit. You're really good at this kinda stuff. Could I get some pointers?

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