All Comments on 'Wine Country Weekend'

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
Wow...That was a first date?

That was so Hot, and soooo Erotic. Excellent first story. One minor point, Just try a few dashes ---- to indicate the change between who is narrating. Really thats all. Can we expect a sequel?

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