by theMasterBaiter
You said at the beginning "Most everyone ends up happy in the end". What about their children? Sorry, I don't think so.
I loved the story arc in this! Another well written and imaginative sexy tale. Well done!
Yeah, absolutely horrible. It would have been better if they both killed themselves at the beginning. I gave it an honest try but I couldn't keep going.
Really liked this story and the basis of this story. Please continue to riff on the idea of "wing women". Great stuff!