All Comments on 'Winter Mix Ch. 12: Returns'

Oh, no - what happened?

Need at least an epilog...

Judith and Roberta seem likely to continue loving up Barney; Phil has an 'in-home' replacement fuck-toy for Becky who appears to have decided to captain her own ship into the future. This much is apparent in the denoument. Whether Judith, Roberta, and Patricia are pregnant might be interesting to explore, but it may also be anti-climactic. I'll need to think on that. Thanks for your supportive interest, I'm glad you read my story. You may want to consider some of my other histoires, if you have not already done so. MP2 :-)

UNFUCKINGBELIEVABLE.....READ THROUGH ALL THOSE CHAPTERS AND DRAMAS AND IT IS NOT A COMPLETE STORY.....WHEN WILL PHIL MEET HIS COMEUPPANCE.....HE IS AN EVIL MANWHORE....BECKY IS A SLUT

Thanks for reading the story, Anonymous. It is as ‘complete’ as any slice-of-life story might be. Not all characters in all stories are nice or likable nor do all evil people get their comeuppance in short order. However, if you are looking for something like that, may I recommend my story, ALL SAINTS and its sequel, AFTERSHOCKS? These are the 4th and 5th books in a 5 book history about a University counselor named William Carter. Jump in and read away! MP2 :-)