All Comments on 'Winter Trial'

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Chris7swChris7swover 9 years ago
Good one!

Excellently atmospheric - vividly erotic - commandingly readable.

Nice one!

If there be any vaguely adverse comments they would be that I'd have asked for more detail to the sex acts and maybe a bit more conversation.

But good nevertheless - well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Casey 1988

This is one of the saddest stories I have read recently. Another great work from you. the story flowed well and I could visualize being there watching. Anyway I am a male bisexual who is a fan of most of your gay works.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...