by sr71plt
Excellently atmospheric - vividly erotic - commandingly readable.
Nice one!
If there be any vaguely adverse comments they would be that I'd have asked for more detail to the sex acts and maybe a bit more conversation.
But good nevertheless - well done.
This is one of the saddest stories I have read recently. Another great work from you. the story flowed well and I could visualize being there watching. Anyway I am a male bisexual who is a fan of most of your gay works.