All Comments on 'Wish Me Luck, The Sequel'

We've tried opposite story lines ("Back Up Buddy" & Hey, Joe!") and now shared writing ... what's next?

Regards, Jack

Readers have been asking us exactly how we did this story.

I started writing the middle sector about Matt. I sent it to Jake and he wrote more about Matt. I got it back and started the sequel and took Linda to the beach. Jake took over for awhile and we keep sending it back and forth adding paragraph after paragraph. I went ahead and wrote the ending and sent it back to Jake.

He took it and made quite a few editions. We sent it to our editors LadyCibelle and Techsan who sent it back to Jake for approval and he sent it to me for a final read.

We hope you like it. We enjoyed writing it for you. Thank you for reading our stories.

DG Hear

Ronnie Wchuka is right. You and Jake are two of the best writers around. This was such an enjoyable read. (Sometimes it pays to listen to your husband, especially when he suggests writers. LOL)

Now I'm off to read El Paso.

she would not have moved out while he was gone.

how you two worked together on this one. I'm curious to see what's next...another writer added?...thicker plot?...I'll be waiting. Good job guys.

i love dg and jakes stories as they both are two of the top 5 writers on literotica. the only thing that got me was how both peoples characteristics changed. he went from a cheat to a "nice as a guy u will ever meet". she went from not giving her ex a second chance, cold heart woman, to a really caring and loving person. people just dont change that much. other than this i loved the story

I enjoyed it. A great story from two of my favorites.

in the first story she was restless and wanted to sow her oats.now make the hubby the bad guy and it sucks.who in charge here and the writing isn't the same.she fine out at the divorce that he cheating,so all the other crap she talking before the divorce we forget.dg you've wrote great stories for a long time,but this one want sell for me.i lost some of the common sense in the story.destory the man to make the woman ok to be a whore.she trying to fine her self as a slut.you sold out.

loved it

At first I kind of disliked this woman, b/c she said her sex life sucked. When your sex life sucks it's b/c you are an idiot. Show your partner what you like and vice versa, otherwise your an idiot. She didn't give blow jobs, he didn't eat pussy. What the fuck? 2 idiots not taking advantage of what God has given freely to enjoy. Anyway this story flowed real good and her maturity felt right. Finding true love always is a victory. Thanks for the story guys. Please collaborate more, since you guys do it so well. With very high regards, Luis

DG & Jake, it is a fine romance. It told a great story. Above all it has a happy ending and makes my day. You had a couple of commentors wondering about the characters changing attitudes. It happens all the time; as we all get older, most of us hopefully get smarter. Sorry about anonymous in USA. Guess it's your turn in the barrel(s?). Thank You. Ronnie W.

about your partnership is it cuts down by 1/2 the stories that you would individually write. Aside from that it's a good thing.<P>

Having 2 writers of like ilk co-authoring is interesting to see the product and your comments for one another [and us].<P>

Thanks Authors - you are appreciated.<P>

With Very High Regard

Great idea, the two of you working together was perfect. Do it again! I really liked what you did coming from the original to this ending. A really nice story.

Two of my favorite writers teaming up and it works well. I look forward to more.

Always like good samaritans.. You two do extra well together.. Maybe you should consider more stories together?? Matt's first wife was a piece of work.. It was sure lucky he saw the drink get spiked and was able to get her attention about not drinking it.. And she was lucky he looked for and offered the bunk.. She was then able to have a great cruise with Matt and made this a great read!!

I really loved this fine romance. A great story which, above all has a strong hint of a happy ending to come and that truly makes my day. Yes a fine collaboration by DH Hear and Jake Rivers, two of my favourite authors, who we can depend on to give us regular infusions of quality stories so sadly lacking these days at LITEROTICA! Bravo, Pete.

story line. I'm looking forward to more.

This was quite good folks... despite what "whitewash" tried to convey. He, I assume, cannot read any better than he can write.

You two seem to be having a lot of fun doing this. I hope you continue to give us more collaborations.<P>

This was great thank you both for some great entertainment!<P>PT

Well Done... Love the ending!!!

I enjoyed your collaborative effort and thought it was a really good story. Thank you to both of you.

I really liked the story. It was great ending. I like happy endings, couples who make up or repair there relationship. Our people who fall in love. I have read a lot of your stories and you are a very good writer.

Thanks

You guys pulled this together wonderfully -

It was a bit of a tear jerker and a bit of an emotional roller coaster - I got why Matt would want to hurt the ass and it was nice that Judy was around to help her out -

Well rounded and a nice finish -

I was afraid that she was going to REALLY GET FUCKED, LOL.

There's no high ground for her. She's really a horrible person. Glad you guys had fun with the writing and it was well written. But I didn't like her at all.

You do spin a very entertaining yarn. I read all lof your romance and Loving Wives tales. Always a five star read.

yet another failure amongst your better stories...she was just another fucking whore..

Would have been nice to read Matt's wife had fallen on hard times after the divorce having met some one like Barry.

they´ve been already put there by whatever wp i´m using.

corny, but cute story...golden oldies, ´real families´, grandkids...

happily, no egregious errors as in so many of d g hear´s stories where he doesn't know the difference between than and then, or between woman and women, to mention a couple only. my guess as to the reason for such elementary errors is reliance on what i call ´stupid spell check´, by grammar-incompetent authors, astonishingly missed by so called editors. auto spell check is useful only to catch typos for people who know the language and won't accept ridiculous suggestions as d g hear has seemingly done in so many stories. no such problems in this one, whether from better editing, co-author´s cooperation, or the result of d g hear´s return to school to fix his spelling, which would not work if the original problem is due to say, a dyslexia spectrum reason. my apologies if this is the case here. in this story i can flag only one illogical americanism - ´could care less about her´ - opposite to the intended meaning, which most of us will spot. Nonetheless, both authors, thank you, i enjoyed it.

Very nice story, thank goodness for Matt :-) 5 stars

A great story compiled by two great authors

Good, too bad not making Matt sympathetic enough in this story so I don't really feel him. If you make him anguish the cheating he did and maybe because he cheated because drinking too much and immediately confess to his wife would be bearable to me

Enjoyed this second chapter much more than the first one. It would have been nice to know some of the bad things that happened to the exes, both Linda's and Matt's, in their new lives. They both deserved Barry type of companions.

5*

BJ