All Comments on 'Witch Mother'

Loved it! Five stars and a favorite point!

Let her and son continue and bring friends mom and son into play also.

Special when she realized she succumbed to him without magic.

Terrific story and there can be a possible 2 or 3 more chapters?

I have never read your stories before but now I'm going to read more.

5 Stars. Loved it.

As this is satanistic, please state that. Wiccans are witches also and beliefs are radically different.

A question...does Evanora have a sister? :)

Amazing story!!!

I gave you 5 stars because the story was excellent. But there were way too many typos and other writing errors for a really great presentation. Please work on that. Reread before publishing, and/or get another to do it to discover all the oops.

You can add more chapters if you desired. I thought the story was so hot they can be continued.

This one did have a few more corrections to be made than your others.

But the fact your first language isn't english puts other stories on this site to shame.

Well done

Can we ask what language is your first? Just my curiosity.

Glad it turned out that it happened essentially without the magic! So much hotter. Love for the girl to get involved but, it would be fantastic to continue with just the mom!

I like the story so far. Mom needs to get her 'friend and son' involved in his sex education. Oh and we can't forget.. "Angela"... was it? Maybe the old girlfriend needs some education with her mom or dad being involved. I know that Mom is a witch so some magic will need to be involved. Bring on the sex.

I enjoyed it and easily gave it 5 STARS.

Even with some typos it was very engaging and hot to read. Kept me excited and hard all through. Nice character development and definitely leaves me wanting more.

I agree with the others, knowing English is not your primary language, that some closer editing could be done. Still very readable and enjoyable. Please continue. I personally enjoy reading multiple chapter stories. There are many on here that would love helping you proof read and offer constructive edits as well as spelling and grammar suggestions.

Looking forward to reading more of your writing.

Pretty darn ff'in wonderful! :-) This would make a damn good daytime soap opera on TV. Could run for at least three seasons. :-) After the first two or three shows with some development the rest could all be exactly the same thing with slight variations in the order of the acts and everyone would still love it!

Lovely work - remind me of rawly rawls wicked tower. We need more in the fantasy genre!!!

Incredible!

If there's another installment, please DON'T bring other people into their bedroom. They're crazy about each other - it would ruin the story if all of the sudden they're inviting everyone and their uncle to the party. Forgot Angela and Portia - Caius finally got his dream woman, and his dream woman finally figured out that the only man she needed was right in front of her!

5 stars. Ridiculous but wonderful. More mom son stories

Boring! Author was obviously trying desperately to build romance and passion but focused too much on the mechanics of the sex acts rather than highlighting the incest aspect.