All Comments on 'With Daddy'

An excellent story. You could add more detail, especially in th etorica, bug ogherwise, Very goood!

i disagree with the first reply, the lack of detail made it all the more realistic and erotic. if it were written any differently it would have been no differen than any other incest story. **favorite part** the head turning and sucking, genius!1

Great writing but I too would have liked more detail- with the sexy way you write detail would have us all climbing the wall

I liked the story however it could have had a little less info about life and how it was and a little more suspense of what was to happen. I liked it and it did it's job for me.

I just think that it would have been better with the sugestions that I have made.

I never thought I would actually do it either but your story is my life I am living with my step daughter we got it on when I she was just 18 on her birthday and we have had a lasting relationship she is now 25 and wants a baby I don't for the first time its an issue, the thing in your story is the lust and its short and sweet it is all good the way to make it more real is to add the years of longing and the mystery I never for a second thought about the incest aspect as being bad its the spark the ignition the taboo that makes it so sexual the longing for that which we are not meant to have all dads love there little girls and think about it , daughters sucking dads cocks and dads licking their little girls out, we have alot of anal sex I don't trust her on the pill, I am allways getting told when we are out I have a very sexy daighter and when we stay at places we are looked at strangly when they realise we sleep together. Is the author really into it lets see a bit more honesty about your real feelings . best shortest story

detail--The main difference in the stories is the plot.

How did they get there.

If the reader doesn't know how a cock feels when it's in a mouth or a vagina or for that matter in someone elses hand then it's time for them to go find out.

What really makes a difference is whose hand, mouth or vagina.

Of course for those who like the shithole it might make a difference whose shithole.

As a writer I hav often thought of creating a file of sex scenes. Then when I get to that part of the story I would then add file 2a for the come over the girl, 3c for the bj, 4a for the pussy lick, 1b for the doggie fuck and 1 b for the missionary fuck.

good telling. Needed little more susoense.

good telling. Needed little more susoense.

The story was good. The characters had good depth, good background. Sentence structure was good, grammar was good ( two things which are sadly lacking in a lot of these stories). The erotica could have been a little better, but it was good. The finish seemed like the author didn't know how to end it so he/she just said "The end". The writer has good style and shows a lot of promise as a writer and should continue writing erotica for us perverts! Thank you, whoever you are!

why argue and comment hundreds of pages? just read, see and enjoy, fancies, fannies, and fantasies.if at all it comes to yourself, then watch out, for society is a hypocrite.

Loved your story," With Daddy, and the story about mom showing son how to kiss. You have the knack for writing a sexy story. Keep it up.

it si sweet love lust story of daughter and daddy

Damn, all I can say is damn

Rosamund?? This may be a super dumb complaint, but I had a hard time reading this story because of her name, sorry if this is someone's name but in my mind I it sounded like a man's name or last name maybe, but very not sexy at all.

Hot story, too bad it will never be completed