All Comments on 'With Interest Ch. 02'

Chapter One was an exciting piece that had great potential for development at the same high level of interest. This chapter carries the story but does not have the energy of your earlier effort. It is as though you are marking time and filling in some background information. Bad move....follow the action, follow the conflict and develop the characters of the sexual participants and the fever between them. Make a come back with Chapter Three. AnHoa Rifleman

Where did Quincy come from?

Time to get the party started! The first chapter was good, the next chapter was okay, so let's see if you can hit it out of the park with the next one.

I would also like to see the second chapter in FINDING MOTHER that you teased us with years ago. Please continue that story too.

Hot damned. You have a great story going here. Don't stop now.

This has a great story line. Keep it up!

But, all the grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes make it very difficult to read. Why don't you get an editor?

Develop the relationship between Mom and Ted. Have Ted's wife, Sarah, decide she wants Ted's dad to do the honors for their first baby. Who the hell is Quincy? Piss on him, this story is about Ted and Molly and Ed and Sarah. Still waiting for chapter three. AnHoa Rfielman

Please continue. Love all ur stories

i wish you had continued it. this chapter was a little short, and although i liked the sexual interplay, there could have been more! oh well.