All Comments on 'With Interest'

Great story, but please use an editor next time....

The amount of errors in this gave me a headache

trying to read it.

awesome story reading this was like being there see both the son fucking and filled his moms very hot horny pussy while dad fucks the daughter in law adding yet more to the swinging more of this awesome story.

Good grammar is a wonderful, elevating thing and you need to have an editor proofread your stuff as others have pointed out. Having said that, this is one of the best plot lines I have seen in a while and it has a tremendous amount of room for further development. Write the second chapter right away. Don't worry about the spelling when you are writing, just get the story out and down on paper. Let the editor correct the glitches later before you post the story. I'd like to see mom and son become very comfortable having sex with one another, perhaps son getting mom pregnant and dad getting daughter-in-law pregnant, but the direction of the story is something you must attend to regardless of the suggestions of others. A great story! AnHoa Rifleman

Very, very bad grammar - a 5th grader could have done better - made the story almost unreadable - it is a very good story plot but you really need an editor if you are going to oontinue writing.

This is the AnHoa Rifleman again. Some of these reviewers are being very unfair. Your grammatical glitches aren't that noticable. I think some of these guys just like to jump on the bandwagon. They sense that there is some agreement about something negative and they start circling with the rest of the buzzards. They have no personhood in this area. Keep writing. This is a good story and the grammatical issues are not that compelling. Your plot line and the eroticism it evokes are very compelling. Forget the unfair words of the losers and get chapter two done. AnHoa Rifleman

Great Story that I fully enjoyed. Will be reading more of your work. Meanwhile would hope that there is at least another chapter to this story

Scotty

I would like to read more of their affair with mom and son getting it on, just the two of them.

Thanks for the read.

Everyone is patiently waiting for Chapter Two. Come on now and get to work. Your public is suffering from extreme anticipation. AnHoa Rifleman

Great story. Loved it. Get chapter two posted soon.5+

i like all the action. looking forward to chapter 2