All Comments on 'Wolf's Kiss Ch. 08'

glad you are still writing! Love this story! Do continue!

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Welcome back.Loving this, excellent chapter.

I can't wait for more!! What was everyone looking at? How will Jake and Shaynas relationship going to play out? Why did Gerard suddenly shift and take Marisa?? CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!! =D =D

But if I had known about the cliffhanger, I would have waited before reading it. Hurry back.

pls do not take such a long time writing the next chapter .

ps love your story

I'm so happy to see this chapter I felt like this gif

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and this one

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you have to copy and paste them in your browser to view there both hilarous tho

Thanks so much can't wait for the next chapter: Gerard St. Simon and Marisa reunited can't wait!!eeek LOL

I absolutely love this! so heartwarming and suspenseful! Man PLEASE dont take too long to post more. im anxiously waiting more

she is still clueless that she is his MATE and that there will be no going back to her normal life, which to me was pretty crappy anyway and very lonely. I though he had already told her she was his mate I thought she had accepted that fact. Why did Gerald take her gran when all he had to do was ask her and she would have gone with him at least that is what it seemed like because she was the one that ran to him. I hope the next chapter is posted soon and ends some of my confusion and Oh where is the bitch that want to be Jake's mate? I know she is lurking somewhere to cause a problem. Which will no doubt make us wait even longer before they finally fully mate and she is changed. Sigh!!!!

This man sure knows how to please a woman in bed, doesn't he? My only concern would be the times when he's caused her pain from him banging into her cervix--ouch! (Been there, done that--did NOT enjoy it.)

Thank you for writing again!!! Love Jake!!

Keep writing !

Great series! I love how the characters are developing. The sex scenes are good but I wish there was more talking involved--which is always interrupted by Jacques ravishing Shayna. I honestly love Shayna's personality & I wouldn't change anything about it. Although once in a while I wish that she could put her foot down and say, "No, first we need to talk. Sex can come after."

I do agree the the chapter was a bit disjointed. They had sex but barely talked to each other, they hung out with different people, worked separately, learned separately, watched each other from a distance...etc etc. Their connection was what drew me in in the first place and it's their interactions that makes them interesting. Don't get so caught up in the developing storyline that you forget their relationship.

Regardless, I enjoyed that and I will be looking forward to more.

Keep it coming. Can't wait until the next chapter to see what happens

need more on them soon-Thanks :>)

It appears that Gerard cannot be trusted. And Jake needs to spend more time seriously courting Shayna. Right now it looks like he's only into the relationship for the sex.

Can't wait to find out hat happens next. I agree there needs to be more wooing of the girl.

Please don't keep us hanging... I'd love to see what happened next between Marisa and Gerard and also how the relationship of Shayna and Jake grow.

We want to know what happens!

There needs to be a passionate wildinout over the top fuckinfantastic lovefest between Gerald and Marisa please don't skimp on these passionate long lost lovers, Like you did in this chapter where was the fire between Shayna and Jake I loved it but it wasn't like the sexylovefest scenes in her apartment lets get it back to that scene "the dream come true dick"wishin she he was Inside and all of a sudden the dream came true" and a bunch of other detailed nasty exploits that was simply delicoso....crazy hot! Lets get it back to that...Thanks, I luv your stories you are the bomb writer and plus I've read it like a gazillon so looking forward to the next highly anticipated chapter

Sincerely a STAN for tempted angel "Wolf Kiss"

-avidreader

excellent, excellent!!!!!!! Please don't keep us waiting so long this time!! I love this book of yours!!!! :)

plz continue....we really need mre///

This is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have stayed up until 3:30am to find that I have been left hanging..Plz hurry and finish this. Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i really hope the next installment will be more of gerard and marissa's story. lol. i wonder how long i have to wait this time.

great job on this chapter. :)

Looking forward to more of this story ..

til the next chapter!! :)

one of the best stories i've read please write the next chapter.

Wow, I can't believe you've been writing your series for so long. Kudos for keeping up with it rather than leaving your fans hanging after falling in love with your characters and their stories. Btw the compliment in there was that I've fallen in love with your characters and your storytelling has been great. Keep up the hard work!! We're waiting for you!

I'm absolutely loving reading this story. I haven't been able to put it down and I'm rushing to read it every moment I get. Please write more. I can't wait to see what happens next and I'm so sad I'm on the last chapter written so far!

Just wow! And yum yum yum......

please come back and add more this is a great story and i cant wait to read what happens next...atleast give sum idea of a timeline...and i understand writers block i also am a writer just not on this site yet...

please please please continue!!! i'm on pins and needles on what happens next!

because the next chapter isnt up yet.

i cant wait 4 more!!!!!

is so incredibly well written... please please please post another chapter soon!!

please...

such a good read, and I'm greedy for more

i love it, i hope you decide to continue the story, im in love with it please continue!!!

Omg this story is amazing and I've been waiting for Ch. 9 . Please don't keep us in the dark any longer !

That was soo good! Can't wait for more so hurry!!!!!! I love your writings!

Please update soon! This story is great!

How soon is Chapter 9 going to be up? I am tied to your story now and hate to wait for the last chapter:-) What is the connection with the ring Shayna purchased in the antique store? Please hurry

Write more soon!

I hate to get wrapped up in a story only to find out it's not finished, I read this all in one day thinking that it was a completed :( this chapter was posted in January, its almost August, will it be completed?

I have just finished reading all of the "Wolf's Kiss" chapters, and now find myself hanging from the proverbial "Cliff" by my fingertips! Please - we are all waiting with baited breath for the next score of chapters, or at the very least - one or three more chapters. BTW, absolutely love the story. LEKarchner

Ok so, I've read your story before and I had to revisit hoping that you had already added a new chapter. I'm still waiting and it's killing me. I love your characters and this story has quite a few twists and turns. I can't tell you how much I want to finish this story up. To see where Jake and Shayna are going. Please, please, please give me more of this story. Thanks Syn'

Please continue this story!!!! :(

really??

I hate to get wrapped up in a story only to find out it's not finished, I read this all in one day thinking that it was a completed :( this chapter was posted in January, its now the end of August, will it be completed?

PLEASE!

some really good writers get you hooked on the story and then don't finish it. It's sooooo frustrating how many of them are like that. what do you have to do read the end first to make sure it actually ends before reading the beginning?

Hurry the damn thing up man!

Please finish!!

Come on, please finish the story.

I hate it when you find a bloody good story and the author takes forever to post new chapters as a published author I can't imagine why someone would post a chapter without continuing to work on the rest of the story and posting as quickly as possible for teh feed back so that they can improve their skills and talent

TR1C@hotmail.co.uk

Great story. Unfortunately it's another of the never ending supply of unfinished stories. So very frustrating.

Noooooo it ended ughhh ima die I needa knoe wat happens!!!

Great story, probably only needs 2 or 3 more chapters to wrap up the current arcs. Let me know if you need a story editor or sounding-board.

Please write a few more chapters to complete this story

Continue the story! I would love to know what happens.

Please finish this :-(

FINISH PLEASE

The story is great, please finish.

Please don't quit now!

Another great story that I was really enjoying that is looking like it won't be finished. Ended on a cliffhanger with him kidnapping Marisa and vehicles coming towards the compound.

JUST WHEN I WAS GETTING INTO THIS STORY IT ENDED. THIS IS A DAMN GOOD STORY. PLEASE CONTINUE IT.

ok now.. we all know this story isnt even half finished yet!! so PLEASE put us all out of our misery and finish your wonderful tale!! keep up the good work!

It's such a good story. I will keep checking back to see the next installment.

This story is so amazing! please come back to continue!!! *cries*

Please update! I just found this story and I'm completely in love with it. It seems every time I find a good werewolf story, they're never finished.

You really need to do more before we hunt you down and tie you to a keyboard... Um, I think the only really criticism I would have, as odd as it sounds, is less sex and more plot. I know that we are in an erotic literature site but in this case we already know that he wants to plunder her depths and she wants him to but to me in a way the plot is more important than how many times the screw during the day, evening, and night unless it advances the plot.

Great story,,but since its been well over a year since this chapter was posted,i guess is very very doubtful it will ever be finished...as so many others are on here,,,i guess i need to start at the last chapter to see if it is done before beginning a story,,,such a waste of great work..

I hate when fucking authors do that!

This story is amazing!!!! Could you please please please write more, I just can't leave it at that, the suspense is killing me and this story is all i ever think about these days

This story just pulled me right in, I love it.... So please please keep writing!!

This is a lovely story and it seems you have put a lot of effort into it. I feel it's pretty close to the end, not many chapters missing. What a pity that you never took time to finish it!!

Please finish this story one of the best I have read on this site.

We've been waiting months and months for you to finish. What's taking you soooooooooooo long. As a reader it is totally disturbing when their is no conclusion to a story. Looking forward to your next chapter.

waited a year and a half and still no finish to the story. Guess this is another good story that will not be finished. sigh

plz finish it pains me to not see it done. mTnTm

Wonderful story so far ~ need the rest of it finished!! J

Please up date for your many loyal readers, the suspense is tormenting them and me and I have only just read the story!

Another story not finished; seriously, what is the problem with the authors on this site? Waiting over months to a year for the next edition to any story is just poor showmanship; sorry, but this is getting to be an annoying trend.

Although my taste for the non-human is generally for the black female & white male genre. This story was a good read. I understand that life happens and many writers have writer's block or something else gets in the way. So, if you never finish this story I as well as other readers will be disappointed. You have your own life to live and the rest of this story will like many other things remain mystery.

Were is the rest of it. This story was going so good... when is the rest coming out?

I really love the story line. I am so disappointed that you left it hanging. I know it takes time to get things done but even the Printed authors release more at one time and don't leave it hanging that bad.

Ugh

I agree WTH is wrong with the authors on this site?? I'm sick of the lure in and get to the end and no conclusion and then really discouraged when you see the last submission date so you know there will be no more and you must come up with yr own ending!! What a letdown for your readers!!! Ugh!!!!!!

I have enjoyed every minute invested in reading this series and cannot WAIT for the next chapter! You're a wonderful writer who has created fascinating, sexy characters combined with a terrific story! Hurry! Hurry! We want Chapter 9!

This never ending stories need to STOP. It is becoming really annoying. The stories are good but maybe the writers need to complete their story and then submit them seriously.

Will u PLEASE come back and finish this story!!! It's been 2 yrs!!!

Another unfinished story

It is indeed a sad thing to get warped up in a very good story and discover it was left unfinished. That's why I always..always...ALWAYS start with the last chapter. After you confirm it's a complete story,then you can go back and restart from the beginning.

Another unfinished story it was wonderful but hate that ppl can't be bother to finish what they start.

This is the first time I've actually been pissed at an unfinished story. Like seriously, the author had better be dead to not finish such a fantastic story.

This story is so good, won't you please continue it and bring it to a satisfying finish? Please?

Seriously who the fuck leaves a fucking story unfinished!! Are you gonna continue or what?! Geez you have talent and an eye for very imaginative story telling, has no one ever told you to finish what you started

WHAT HAPPENED?!?! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!

Sometimes even writers have real lives they must attend to. So as much as you are enthralled by this absolutely fantastic and stunning story... know that the writer's are human with lives of their own. They give of themselves freely when posting stories. You should be honored they share their imagination with us.

Also, patience is best

It was already posted that there was writer's block; it happens to many.

Please, be understanding and patient.

How dare you say that a writer better be dead.

I hope I am not the only one offended by your response nor the only one that has taken you to task.

You are rude!

Girl when you coming back to finish this...

When people have comments that range the gamut from "when will there be more" to "why do authors start and not finish" and so on.

Fact is that yes an author can have writer's block, family or personal health issues, financial or other issues, computer/hard drive issues etc.

On the upside a story like this one (and several others on Lit) can also challenge the imagination and therefore let us all imagine ourselves in what other paths it might go.

How many times have you read a book and then, when you've seen the movie or television version, been disappointed in the latter because it never met your own mental image of the book.

There is no need to ever denigrate or insult an author albeit tempting in those cases where it has the tenor of a 13 year old's fantasy of a one page "jerk-it-off" without much of a plot.

This story I am glad to say does not fall into that category. So those of you that feel you have to be insulting and crude should be ashamed of yourselves. Those of you that are impatient for the next chapter - well I am as well, not only here but for several other stories. However I am willing to wait and hope the author is able to continue.

Please continue this!