All Comments on 'Wolf's Pet Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story

i'm just windering how old she is because she keeps in saying she so much older than him. it's a lovely story keep writing

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
Pulled In

With every chapter I get more pulled into this story. I like the fact that Karen is dreaming of Cole's wolf. Her subconscious is accepting the whole idea of weres. Or is there really something about her that no one knows about? All her friends are weres. I just saying it's a possibility. And now that she has mated w/Cole in her dreams he is dreaming of being w/Karen. And I haven't even mentioned everything going on w/the rouges.

You have pulled me into this story and I look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Love the series...keep it coming

sweetie86sweetie86over 12 years ago
love it!!!

Keep em coming!!! So worth the wait!!!@

DawnzoDawnzoover 12 years ago
Love it!!

Hope the other girl roomies are mates too..Make it a series whoopee

allimbaallimbaover 12 years ago
SOOOO GOOD!

I absolutely love this story! It's amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
i like this .....

I'm so glad I came across your story. It is quite enjoyable and thanks for the quick posts.

*****

reader018reader018over 11 years ago
That ending was funny and ironic!

He was wondering the same thing in the last chapter!!!!

maxd01maxd01about 11 years ago

It is a bit late at this point but I sort of wish the posts were longer than a single page or a page and barely a second. The other thing is you have done some time skips that sort of had me blinking. What I mean by that is the male is in one spot one moment and then walking into her room the next. I would have to suggest either putting in something that indicates a time skip sort of like you have been doing when you separate what is happening to her and him.

I am enjoying this though a great deal.

Ellienora35Ellienora35almost 11 years ago
I like the idea

I really like the plot of this story and the idea of it, but I am having a really really hard time telling what is a dream and what is reality. If you do dream sequences in the future, maybe the dreams could be in italics?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Breath!

Lol fix breath!! To breathe!

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