All Comments on 'Wolf's Pet Ch. 34'

I laughed so hard when Cole realized Becky and her friends thought they wouldn't find thier mates until the were in your 100's. In all seriousness it was nice to see both girl made happy by this move to Europe. Now to get through the European Council and then on to the Wolf Moon matings. And oh yea we can't forget about Guillame and his chosen lady for this evening. There is defiantly more to her than meets the eye.

It's really easy to forget that if Gary hadn't found the gene and gone rouge none of this would be happening. So for all the pain he caused did he do good in the end?

Delicious work, lilgirlsix ^_~

I can't wait to read on ...

PS: Please dont abandon your other delicious stories either *drools*

I don,t mind short chapters, just keep them coming frequently!

I am loving every chapter - your writing and story telling has just got better and better - its so great to see something developing in front of your eyes. Keep them coming - I know you will!

Very enjoyable, i just wish the chapters were longer, but then i guess if they were we'd have to wait longer for each submission :(

Your story started with a very interesting plot: Vlkolak females, wanted by rogues turned into dire wolves, rescued by Carr's pack, with everyone waiting for the special mating results on the wolf moon. But along the way it seems like everyone is finding their mate, at the expense of the story's plot moving forward. Minor characters, who add nothing to the plot, are brought in just to dedicate chapters to their finding mates. These mates are then rarely, if ever, heard from again. I wonder how many chapters will go to the European council members finding mates with the few remaining single females in the pack, before the plot moves forward. I've put in too many hours to just drop this story, so I'll do word searches on Jenna and Katy in future chapters to find out what happens with the Vlkolak.

Yves

I am enjoying your tale - it is well written and the characters are well developed.

It would have been sweeter if Joszef was the one who explained it to her and not Cole. But still, this is a nice chapter ^-^

Which kind of sucks, b/c now I have to wait for the rest. I'm looking forward to it though. Keep up the great work.

@ The anonymous comment(2 comments down I believe,)

You don't know any more of the story than we do so it's a bit hasty to assume the characters who end up mated aren't as relevent as Katy and Jenna.

I'd also like to point out that at this point the only reason Katy and Kenna are set apart is because of the design for them to become panthers, not wolves. Aside from that and the fact that they are mated to the two most prominant wolves in the Northern Territories, it has yet to be established whether or not they are anymore significant than any other character.

You are jumping the gun by assuming that those characters have nothing to offer to the story. Even if they are not the "it" character at the time, they lend to the story and tie the overall plot together. It's the entire point of story telling. How else are we able to identify with the characters. lilgirlsix has yet to stray from the plot. She has tied every character into the point of each chapter. The characters you refer to who aren't as "important" (paraphrasing) in one chapter, have appeared in later chapters as a primary focus. It all comes together.

The story has yet to end.

Your work is exceptionally well written and thought out for this site. Where can I get a print copy of this for my bookcase? This would fit right next to my Sherrilyn Kenyon and Christine Feehan books. Keep up the good work...I read 34 chapters in one sitting...addictive stuff :D

Do what I do when I catch up... start again and so by the time you get to the chapter you are up to there is another one waiting lol I have read this story that way from the start.. and I agree with Anon this is worthy of being on my book shelf too. I love Christine Feehan, Keri Arthur and Sherilyn Kenyon this is as good as theirs Thank you.. now onto the next chapter hehe

I wish Becky and Andrea luck in learning Hungarian. It's completely unrelated to any other European language, I believe. :P

Oh god, poor Becky. Love it.

The only bad thing about this is that I want more Karen and cole and a little less of all the other mated pairs