All Comments on 'Wolves'

um...good story. Though honestly speaking, I hope this was one time sorta thing.

FUCK WHAT THE OTHER COMMENTER SAYS ABOUT ONE TIME ONLY THING KEEP THIS STOREY GOING LIKE THE FIRST TWO MUCH LOVE HUNIBEE

Kalamazoo, Thanks again for another interesting story. This thinking was out of the box and I rather enjoyed it. Infact I enjoyed it so much that i'm begging your creative mind to come up with a CH.2. You know I'm wondering how her family will find her new situation and most importantly why was that female Misty (who I know you just didn't mention for nothing) was just looking at her. Did she want one of the brothers??? When is Allie going to change and will she be called out also.... See I'll be looking and praying you send us a part 2. Thanks

Got to admit I enjoyed it but felt that it lacked depth in places.it needed to be fleshed out more, her compliance was to easy. wolves are very predatory and even a playing wolf is dangerous, there was no element of danger. Any good fantasy story still needs to have an edge of realism.

hhieee, I loved ur story, it was funny and had heart....

Nicely done. I do think it was a bit rushed and could have used a little more detail and description in places, but it was good. I was just a bit confused about Misty -- it said she was Marshall's sister, but then talked about her "dead brother." So I'm quite sure who she was.

I would love you you to continue with this set of charaters and plot line. i would love to see where it goes from here!

Okay, there are a few things I wanna say, so bear with me.

Firstly, I do agree that it could have been a bit more fleshed out in certain areas, and I think this will be just fine as a one time sort of thing.

Secondly, I don't know if you try to make your leading ladies reflections of yourself, but I would personally like it if you showed some sort of diversity in their descriptions. So far, all three of them have been short, overweight, and dark-skinned with short, natural hair. While I don't think there's anything wrong with that type of person, I do think that having all of your characters be that type of person is redundant and kind of boring. Just a suggestion though.

With all that being said, I do think that you're a reasonably talented writer, and would love to see more from you soon.

that was good cant wait 4 more!!!

I love the beginning and can't wait for more!!!

To anonymous, if you're tired of her writing about short overweight dark women, read something else. I actually appreciate that she writes about this kind of woman because frankly I'm tired of reading about women with perfect bodies light skin, light eyes and long hair. The author has the right to describe her characters how she wants, and if you notice a trend, just stop reading. It's not rocket science.

Kalamazoo, I really appreciate your awesome updates.

BBW? Check. Hot wolf males? Check. Hot guys that get each other off? Fail/Check why did they have to be related? That part was, eehhh not my cup of tea. If they hadn't be related? epic win!! I do agree with some of the other readers that the characters could have been more fleshed out. I truly have enjoyed your other stories, and when i saw this today I nearly yelped, at work no less. Keep up the good work and please can u write another story like this? Oh and keep the dark skinned women in your stories. That is one aspect I truly enjoy. 9 out of 10 stories have carmel, butterscotch or light skinned women who all way have " wild curls that frame their faces" that they " through up in a messy bun" arrrghhhh I wanna scratch my eyes out whenever i see that messy bun line. Chocolate women, like myself, hardly gets no play on paper or in life. So at least stories like these give me something to day dream about. Thank for the great words and I look forward to another suprise story from you.loll

I've been telling people for years that I wouldn't have a problem with polygamy if it were equal opportunity, and here you've given her a husband for every weekday! I noticed the Anonymous comment about all of your characters sharing the same physical features, but coming from a caramel-skinned sister, who seems to write about caramel-skinned sisters; I think it's great that you're giving beautiful dark-skinned women their due :-D Do your thing because you do it well!

Amazingly well written story. I love werewolves, personally, and relate to them.

I love your idea of them all having one mate and having it be completely equal.

Please, keep up the good work & write more to this story!

Yes! Someone who writes a real woman as sexy!

isnt this like a twilight type theme remixed???

Well doesnt mean i didnt like it. it was superb. cant wait for more. just add more details on the fighting part. like street fightin with bulidng crashes stalls destruction. and all.

Really great story and I am hoping you are going to do some more chapeters to this. I am a BBW as well and I love it when I read a well written story that is positive about us plus sized women. Plus you have managed to hit on one of my innermost fantasys! Wow you did good. Thank you.

I really enjoyed your portrayal of the sexy BBW that is Allie Walker. She knew what she wanted, and was not afraid to go for it. I'm not particularly into group or anal sex, but the acts of that nature were not over the top or overbearing in their description, so I had no problem reading about and even appreciating them.

I like the fact that Allie was a normal woman--one that I could identify with, being a large and lovely multiracial woman myself. She was comfortable with herself and her own sexual nature, but she still had some insecurities regarding her imperfections, according to the commonly-accepted ideas of perfection... Those quietly voiced insecurities made her more human--more real--to me. I would certainly have no problem hearing more from her.

My only concern for a continuation of the story is that with Allie having so many mates, I did not feel a real connection with any of them in particular. I felt more than a bit left out of the internal workings of their minds--I was only an observer, not a participant. It would be nice to have the mates more fleshed out, but my fear is that the story will become bogged down with the internal goings on of too many characters, each of which happen to be involved with the same woman. I think leaving this story to stand alone would do it more justice, and we can appreciate it for it's steaminess and overall good writing... but that's just my opinion. Excellent job (:

I love this story. i not fond of anal and group sex but this is really damn good. Well all your stories are good and they just keep getting better and better. Good job keep the chapther coming.

I was unable to read the whole story as I am too drunk. But what I read I really liked . . .

what does BBW meannnn?? i am relli unaware of the full form of it

Bbw means big black woman

I was rendered speechless when i started reading this. It's very different from your other works, which is good because it shows that you can be versatile. Im wondering what your brain is like...ummm where does one get such outrageously brilliant ideas!!

I liked this story, and agree with some of the other comments saying that the characters could have been fleshed out a bit more. Also I am used to reading Were stories where once a wolf finds his mate no other wolf/man is allowed near her. So it was quite interesting to read this take on mating with all five brothers.

Also are you going to write another chapter to explain her familys' reaction and what about this Misty character? Why is she watching her like that? i think you have another chapter there to explain all that.

I'll keep checking back for any updates.

Ceeyena xoxo

You have a totally awesome gift....Please keep up the great work.

love that the main girl is a black and kinda bbw. i am looking for a next chapter, i would 'alice' to be stronger girl. hello, black with 5 big strong hot guys. she cannot be weak, they picked her for a reason .... she be a deeper person.

the sex was dead on and hot as fuck...loved it.

Keep writing....i wish i was allie..mmmm...great story

story rocked my world! I love it and want more!!!

I flove this story. I want more I'm just a sucker for werewolves, too. So please continue.

That was good. I enjoy the story. Good job I hope you write more stories like this paranormal menage interracial. Question Misty brother is he Marshall or Vincent? Please continue I like to know what happen.

After I reread the story I could see why you were confused. Misty is the sister to Vincent. I put mistakenly put Marshall's name there instead of Vincent's.

and this story was written as if you had been in my head whilst i was dreamin. excellent story so far, i would love to see where this goes...

The whole story line is really different from the "normal" were storys I've read. I enjoyed it and am now going to chapter 2 since it has already posted.

I am so excited that someone took the plunge and posted a story about multiple partners in the nonhuman category. With my Kindle and Nook I've been downloading these types of stories for months now. It's great to finally see something in this category posted on Literotica. You're off to a great start with this story. I look forward to reading more.

if you want to read a really good non human story with multiple partners read "a slave to the servants" by doctorwolf. it is an excellent read in the sci-fi cat.

i just want you to know that i love you..lol..u r awesome..and then when i thought the best read ever was over i looked down and what do i see.. 2 more chapters! i fell in love all over again..lol..

I'm not usually into polygamy themed relationships in stories but you somehow have made all of the guys so endearing and made it so filled with genuine caring and love that I'm jealous. lol guys that don't mind a woman with some meat on her bones and who clearly tire her out in bed. Sign me up! :)

DAMN. Now this is my type of story. Now I've always wanted a sexy ass man or two in my bed but to have 5 I need to start a club so that we can get this party started. LOL its a great story so far. Have you been reading my journal girly???

I loved this story. I have always dreamed of the same thing so it really got to my heart strings. can't wait to read more. It made me cry all the way til the end. I love the brothers with Tony being the best. Can't wait to see what else happens.

Great Story!

I wish I was Allie. Who wouldn't want to b4 lived and cared for, not to mention a heart sex life!

Where was Tony for the last love making session?

When are you going topi continue? I love the story and want you to finish it.

I love this! Keep up the amazing work! <3

This story is like a piece of heaven... I love it

Love your writing style and have come back to read this one several times. Even though I know how it's going to end I still read to the end and am totally captured by the story and characters.

I have read all your stories at least three times. I swear there wasn't one female lead that I didn't identify with. Especially Katrina in Ethan. You are beyond talented and I hope you continue.

I come back to read this often. It’s one of my favorites. I hope that one you will be able to give us an update one what’s going on in their lives.

This is a piece of shit. The writing is stale,stilted, and the main character is annoying af. None of it makes sense starting with the dumb bitch letting 5 strangers in her house for no damn reason or her being so submissive from the get go. At this point it's easy to determine the author is a darkskin,fat, ugly black woman who is lonely and short since that describes all her characters in her stories and she is old af since she stays having her main female play some puzzle game on the computer or jigsaws. Write an actual character people would give af about not these redentions of you. Also learn to write a sex scene shitnwas dry as hell.

Wow the last comment made had to be written from a miserable piece of shit! Kal, do you write what you want to write.