by kalamazoo707
Thank you... This Misty B is going to be Trouble times 5. I can't wait to find out what Cecil is going to flip out about most. The fact that Allie is married to 5 white men or the fact that there are 5 of them. Wow can't wait...Thanks agian
this is so good, loving this story, Misty will have to be put down I can see it coming, as for Allie's family yeah I can't wait to see how that plays out.
i love the way you write. it's different from the way other stories are written. it kind of seems like your own personal memoirs, and you write enough to bring up the memory but omit some of the details, that leaves the rest to our imagination! but i think what i love the best about your writing is the personality u give allie. she is so colorful! (no pun intended). i was laughing so hard at some of her comments and the perspective she put things into. i really like her, she's the perfect compliment to her 5 somewhat serious husbands. i'm really hoping that there will be a chapter 3 very soon and i have now included u as one of my favorite authors. so keep it comming!
GURL KEEP GOING WITH SO FAR U R MY FAVA UR STORIES ALL WAY GET TO THE POINTDON;T BE LIKE THESE OTHER PPL ON LITEROTICA WITH THESE SHORT ASS STORIES DO THE DAMM THING
You continue to tell an interesting story. I know you used this chapter to primarily define the differences between each brother. Give them each their own personality and in doing so there own individuality. It makes it so much easier to keep each of the guys straight in my head.
Until Chapter 3
Allie is lucky woman. You go girl. Only drawn back sex scenes need to be more explicit other than that it is good.
That's the term for having more than one husband at the same time. I don't know if it would be useful for your story or not, but I thought that I'd pass it along.