All Comments on 'Wolves Ch. 02'

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kelleigh0127kelleigh0127over 12 years ago
snoopy dance there's a ch2. wonderful...hee hee hee

Thank you... This Misty B is going to be Trouble times 5. I can't wait to find out what Cecil is going to flip out about most. The fact that Allie is married to 5 white men or the fact that there are 5 of them. Wow can't wait...Thanks agian

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 12 years ago
Damn

this is so good, loving this story, Misty will have to be put down I can see it coming, as for Allie's family yeah I can't wait to see how that plays out.

huntersangelhuntersangelover 12 years ago
kalamazoo, i would love to sit down and have a conversation with you

i love the way you write. it's different from the way other stories are written. it kind of seems like your own personal memoirs, and you write enough to bring up the memory but omit some of the details, that leaves the rest to our imagination! but i think what i love the best about your writing is the personality u give allie. she is so colorful! (no pun intended). i was laughing so hard at some of her comments and the perspective she put things into. i really like her, she's the perfect compliment to her 5 somewhat serious husbands. i'm really hoping that there will be a chapter 3 very soon and i have now included u as one of my favorite authors. so keep it comming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oh yEAH!

Please hurry back!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
OK NOW I REALLY DIGGING THIS

GURL KEEP GOING WITH SO FAR U R MY FAVA UR STORIES ALL WAY GET TO THE POINTDON;T BE LIKE THESE OTHER PPL ON LITEROTICA WITH THESE SHORT ASS STORIES DO THE DAMM THING

MizTMizTover 12 years ago

You continue to tell an interesting story. I know you used this chapter to primarily define the differences between each brother. Give them each their own personality and in doing so there own individuality. It makes it so much easier to keep each of the guys straight in my head.

Until Chapter 3

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

wonder what happens on the full moon

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Are you Yvonne Ray? If not .... somebody is jacking your shhhh

kalamazoo707kalamazoo707over 12 years agoAuthor
anon

I was at work when I saw your comment. I am she

darkfaerdarkfaerover 12 years ago
I ain't hatin'

Allie is lucky woman. You go girl. Only drawn back sex scenes need to be more explicit other than that it is good.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
Polyandry

That's the term for having more than one husband at the same time. I don't know if it would be useful for your story or not, but I thought that I'd pass it along.

kalamazoo707kalamazoo707over 12 years agoAuthor
gimletedge

Thanks!

Jujubee58Jujubee58almost 12 years ago

There's always some asshole waiting to screw things up!

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

So far so good.

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