by kalamazoo707
this is it no more of the wolves for me don't end it find something else to do wit this storey it was a good read for me
From a wonderful author. This seemed more like a peek into someone's life than a work of fiction, and whatever story you decide to grace us with next, I can't wait to read!
I hope this is the end of this great story, but if it is then I pray you give Dee & Marshall a story of their own, which includes a happy ending with a baby or two.
when I first started to read the story i was not sure i would enjoy it I am really not into the group sex thing but the way you wrote the story and made it look like we were getting a peek into their lives caught my interest. I would like to thank you for posting this wonderful story and i hope that you continue on with more chapters and even focus on Dee marshal and the kids. looking forward to mer works from you
I LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS WHOLE STORY IT WAS SO GRIPPING I FELT EVERY EMOTION... I FELT LIKE I WAS WATCHING AS THE STORY UNFOLDED!!! GREAT STORY TELLER!!! I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE OF YOUR WORK!!!
You know I flipped when my internet connection went out while reading this. But here I am just as happy as can be. Everything worked out for the lovely black bbw and her 5 men and family. You wrapped everything in a wonderful bow and I know I'll be re-reading this story over and over again in the near future. Once again I'm doing my Snoopy Dance. Once again thank-you for sharing yourself with us.
It was such a great story. Allie seems like a good friend who is sharing her story with a confidante.
If this is the end, I have truly enjoyed this story. I will miss this family.
A story about Marshall,Deb and the boys would be nice to look forward to in the near future.
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i'm so glad that i found your stories, you are such a creative and fun writer that i was so happy each time you uploaded a new chapter. and allie's character? she is such a hoot! I mean stuff like this, Oh yippy skippy! and the "let's get the show on the road" comment when she's finally cleared medically and getting ready to make love with matt, were hilarious! matt and the brothers were so lovable, caring and attentive to allie, that they've endeared themselves in my heart.
overall, i really loved this story and i'm sad IF this is the final chapter, but i'm so glad that i found it. NOW, could you, would you please see it in your heart to give us a marshall and dee story????
I LOVED the ending!!! I'm so glad that Marshal and Dee ended up together!! Are you planning on doing a sequal for those two?? Just a thjought... But honestly I have to say that you are such a great author! If you were to go to a publisher for any of your stories I'm sure they'd pay you a shit load to print at least one of your stories and I'd make damn sure I bought it lol Keep up the fantastic job!!!
This has been a wild ride and i've loved every single moment!
FatBottomedGirl
very beautiful story, even with the killings that seemed to be justified as they were done. Keep up the good writings for us-your readers!!!
Loved it and the happy ending for those in love with one another and karma is real!!!
what a great story!!! I really came to love these characters! Especially the sassy allie and her hunky men! Please continue to write!!!
Where do I start? I loved every bit of this story. I waited patiently for you to finish it before I read it. I usually don't like reading nonhuman stories, but after reading your first story I was hooked. Thanks for creating wonderful stories. Please hurry and finish your other stories and please create new stories.
I too am not into the non-human stories but I loved this one! I do hope there will be a story about Dee and Marshall.
I did my 3rd read and I still can't help but to do my snoopy dance. Ohhh how I love your stories Kalamazoo ( Big cheese smile)...lmao
I don't normally like polyamourous stories but you managed to draw me in and have me fall in love with all her mates. You are a very good story teller.
Great story, but I just realized....I have no idea what the men look like. Do they have dark hair? Light hair? Who's lean? Who's more muscular? Not a problem, I just like to visualize while I read, so I couldn't figure out what was wrong until now.
Still, great story, this is my second time reading it :D
Please write a story about Dee and the kids. I would like to know how their lives turned out.
just read this straight through and WOW! that was all kinds of unexpected wonderfulness.
I just read the entire series straight thru and again U NEED TO BE PUBLISHED! Real talk! U've got to tell me what happened to Dee & Marshall, did they have their own lil cubs & what about Dees boys? Did they learn of their new fathers bloodline?
I SOOO LOVED THE STORY ... MS SADI
I stopped everything and read all the way thru, I want to know what happens with Dee and Marshall and the boys too. You need to be published, I'm an avid reader
and I thoroughly enjoyed your story. It has so many wonderful components. Please,
please, please let us know about Dee and Marshall and continue to write.
So much to live with this story, its actually one of my favs. I love that you know this is a plus sized black woman in the story. Nothing about her looks or ethnicity is ambiguous. I appreciate a strong story where someone like me is reflected. My only disappointment is that it seems the author shied away from e bisexuality of the brothers. I didnt read the comments in the other chapters and there may be a reason for this. However im still bummed about it. I was hoping to see that here. Because that would have been the perfect fantasy in my eyes. I actually told my bfabout this story, and that the main character is living my dream fantasy life. Cute fat black girl with five hit white bi husbands...who are brothers? I almost hate this bitch because i want to be like her so bad! :-D
What can I say that has not been written by everyone else! Kalamazoo707 You Rock! Keep up the good work. I love the fact that you used a sista that did not understand her true beauty. You made her more real than some women walking around live. You gave us a Beauty with a Booty! Thank You....KittyOh48!
Lol. This is lik my 10th time reading this n it still gets to me. I lov ur work and every person in all of ur stories are all diffenent n thats wht i lov about it. U hav a real gift. I lik writing stories but i will never be as great as u but i hope. Love Alissa
I would really appreciate it if yu would make an epiloge of something like that. I am quite curious to see what happens next:)
Lov it. this is my 10 time reading this. This is my fav story. U r amazing and have millions of fans n im one of them!!!
I LOVED IT AND THINK IT SHOULD EXPANDED INTO A FULL BOOK. THE SERIES POTENTIAL IS AWESOME. I CAN EVEN VISUALIZE THE BOOK COVER IN MY HEAD. WONDERFUL STORY!!
This is an incredible piece of work. As usual,very well done.
I agree with two of your commenters:
1) An epilogue would REALLY be nice to see! LOL. Heck forget that and give us the next in the series. LOL.
2) This story kept me up all day and night until I finished it. Yep, I think you should be publishing this story. I would CERTAINLY buy it. You would just have to let us know which publishing house you would be using and when it would be coming out.
I mean it, this story was REALLY WONDERFUL.
I agree with everyone else. This was very well-written and its a wonderful story. I would simply LOVE to see an epilogue showing us how everyone is doing 3 or 5 years later; do Dee and Marshall have children, and does Allie and the brothers have more children. Also, I think it would make a wonderful book!!. If you do that, you will have to tell us where it will be published so we can purchase a copy.
I love this story! I couldn't put my kindle down!!! I'm looking forward to reading your stories,both past and future!!!!
What a wonderful story! I think you have a wonderful storytelling ability and a great gift with words. I could 'see' everything. Thank you for a great job and story. Please keep writing!!
I love this story so much!! I always come back to reread them!! Can't get enough!! I'm hoping you write a "how are they now" type story, it would be AWESOMENESS!!!
Excellent job! Well written, exciting, action packed and just enough down and dirty to make a reader moist and fidgety. Thank you!!