All Comments on 'Women's Studies Ch. 15'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Worth the wait

I followed this story since it began, and I loved every bit of it without bias. I'm glad I was able to see it all the way through!

xoxo

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing!

Having checked for this last chapter several times a day, it was all and more than I could possibly hope for! Really hope to read more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
journey's end

when i read the first part of this story i was a year younger than lexi, in my final year of high school and depressed as heck. now im two years older than her and ive transitioned and i am loving life. lexis life has been running parallel to my life for a while now and i never expected that i would be so emotional when i got to the end of this story, which i only expected to read for the sex scenes initially. seriously, that final paragraph alone is a masterpiece and i am crying happy happy tears.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Loved reading Lexi's story it had a very satisfying conclusion! Thank you!

AspiredHopeAspiredHopeover 4 years ago
Fuck yeah

Your story was awesome from to finish a little rough with the decker part. But you told a fantastic story and thank you for letting us read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Satisfying

I have loved this story, though I'm a bit disappointed at Trevor's inclusion here It is your story to tell and the rest of it is fairly satisfying a conclusion. Please don't take that as a negative I just wish that with all of the relationship and character development between Lexi-Kennedy-Abby that they would have all ended up together in the end.

Nevertheless thank you for giving us such a great story so different than the rest of the ones on this site.

-Andi ^-^

RoAcHariusRoAcHariusover 4 years ago
Yay!

That is all I’ve got :) happy fuzzy feelings

Dreamweaver594Dreamweaver594over 4 years ago
A fitting conclusion

SoB: Nice work, as always. The story grew from a romp to a full-blown tale of anger, betrayal, and eventually triumph. BTW, I caught on to Patricia right away, and it was fortuitous for Lexi that she chose Gail as her mentor. Other laurels have already been said, good luck with future endeavors. dreamweaver594

RobinfliesRobinfliesover 4 years ago
Thank you!

Seriously still crying and its been like 10 min since I finished. I read my first chapter back In October of 2016 after just starting HRT, and a few months I had GRS. My heart was totally in this story for Lexi and the heart strings it pulled were deep! I truly hope we get to read about the wedding one day!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A good script

Won't add much to comments all in favor except to say, you actually have a real script for a good movie. Back in the day, movies did care about the story line and dialogue nowadays it's just well!! You could seriously pursue it and some smart folks could bankroll it once they see it's potential. Just saying, why end there.

LinneaLundinLinneaLundinover 4 years ago
Love Happy Endings

A very satisfying ending to a wonderful story. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Truly amazing

This was such a beautiful story. Perfect from beginning to end. I loved the ride....with the exception of the waiting time, but with that ending, all is forgiven. Wonderful from start to finish. Sad to see it end, but thank you for sharing it with us.

Taboolover420Taboolover420over 4 years ago
Amazing

I was upset that it took so long for the last chapter to come out, but you definitely delivered...

I would love to see a free spin offs, what happens with Kennedy and Abigail and Audrey for that matter. And a spin-off for Lexi and Trevor ?

lilyfluxlilyfluxover 4 years ago
Just the best

I don't usually leave comments, but I had to for this. This series is hands down the best thing I've ever read on this site. I'm sad to see it go but that ending was beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thank you

I have been reading this story since chapter 2 was released, it is my favourite on the site and has helped me think through things I have often struggled with whilst also being super engaging to read. Thank you for the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Just the BEST

Thank you very much for this story. It is definitely the very best story on this page and I congratulate you to your idea.

Would be great to read more stories from you though!

scttr62scttr62over 4 years ago

Great story start to finish can't wait for the next

teddi_bareteddi_bareover 4 years ago
I love Lexi

You have done such a wonderful job with this story and your characters. Lexi's journey was beautiful and heartbreaking and courageous on so many levels. I fell in love with Lexi early on in her journey and her friends are so wonderful. I will miss them all and wish that someday we might get to see their further adventures.

Thank you so much for your story and your writing.

blade_rocknutblade_rocknutover 4 years ago
Commitment!

This story isn't for the faint of heart...however, it *is* for those who wish to have their perceptions challenged and their brains stimulated along with their nethers.

I discovered this series a couple months ago, and absolutely devoured it through the first 12 or 13 chapters (whatever was complete then). The last two chapters have been absolute nail biters, with emotions spawned all over the spectrum. My wife is chiding me for crying (tearing up a little, at least) over a porn story. I adore these characters SOOOO much! It's one of the best sories on Lit, for sure. I remember being similarly impressed with "A Ski Bunny is Born", but I feel more closely connected to Lexi, Abigail and Kennedy than those characters.

Kudos for keeping me well entertained. This story; though salacious and taboo, is also an exercise in acceptance and recognition of alternative lifestyles and fluid identities.

Well done, Son of Battles.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A perfect ending to an excellent story.

Thank you for coming back and finishing the last few chapters. This story is the best I've ever read.

DKMurphy220DKMurphy220over 4 years ago
great series

I loved them all, I won't lie I was hoping for Lexi and Kennedy to end up together at the end.

Dianas2163Dianas2163over 4 years ago
Simply the best.

This is simply put, one of the stories on this page.

Over the years I’ve read almost every story on Literotica, your depth of character your depth of emotion are second to none. Your ideas are thoughtful, insightful and entertaining so much so that I wish you would keep keep going for another three years and 15 chapters.

I will miss the adventures of Lexi Abigail and Kennedy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Fantastic from start to finish.

I started reading this series because it featured Audrey Allen, the Playmate. By the time I realized she wasn't going to be the focus of the story, I was already hooked on Lexi and her adventures. You've got real talent, and I encourage you to keep writing, even if it's not in an erotica setting. And by all means, if you have more Lexi stories to tell, do so. I know I'll read them all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Absolutely wonderful

This such a great series! I do think you owe it to your readers to add another chapter(I n ow you said this was it) about that favor Audrey owes Kennedy.

Fereniki_AlexandrouFereniki_Alexandrouover 4 years ago
Very well done!

"Women's Studies" is definitely one of the best stories on this site. Even though some parts were a bit implausible, those parts can be easily forgiven. You wrote this story beautifully and gave it a perfect ending. You made all of us really feel for the characters. The story definitely got better as it went along. It started out as just another sexy story, but then, somehow, at some point, it turned into something more. I agree with everyone else here that I will certainly miss reading about Lexi, Kennedy, and Abigail's adventures.

In short, you've done excellent work. I hope you succeed as an author in the future!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Turn it into a book and self publish on amazon

It was such an engrossing story that at times I found myself skimming the sex to get on with the plot!

Your writing is superb, your character development fantastic, keeping a plot together through so many years is a testament to your dedication.

I know nothing about you except this story but you could be an author if you wanted to.

Adventure_in_NVAdventure_in_NVover 4 years ago
Worth the investment of time and emotions

First of all, thank you SoB.

A first rate series which keeps the reader on edge, I cannot tell how much I hated waiting for new chapters to appear and now that the series has concluded I'm excited to see what may appear next from our esteemed author.

The final page of our story tells of a "Lifetime" movie and another commenter stated that this series would be a great basis for a film. I agree. I think that there are enough people in our world who would appreciate and enjoy a movie based on Lexi's experience. I've thought of ideas for movies geared toward the LGBTQ community and this would be a great one. We need more positive role models in modern society.

Okay, to be frank, the incestuous portions of "Women's Studies" may be too racy for a mainstream movie...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thank you

This was a lovely journey you created for us to take. I loved this story from the first chapter and I watched it evolved into something much greater than it started as. Thanks so much for creating this and sharing with all of us to enjoy.

crashmattcrashmattover 4 years ago
Thank you.

I can't really find any more words right now. I've read Ch15 through twice, and, yeah. Thank you for an amazing story.

Camguy4funCamguy4funover 4 years ago
Well done!

A terrific and well thought out story. You deserve all the wonderful comments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WOW!!!

That was one of the BEST stories that I have ever read!!

Lill !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Almost sad it's over. I have enjoyed this series quiet a bit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Not just some senseless smut

First came for the wincest and cross dressing, stayed for the amazing lgbtq+ discovery and justice story. This was truly an amazing story that I’d recommend to people, if it didn’t mean admitting to certain things.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Damn amazing.

I never thought I'd finally be able to read the end of this story. But I swear, the ending was most definitely worth the long wait that I had to endure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A Fantastic Fin!!

Having read this story from the start, I am so happy to see things worked out for Lexi, Audrey, Kennedy and Abigail. The last minute Knight on Shining Cycle in the form of Trevor was a really nice surprise! I hope you have more for us even if its not in the Lexiverse.

Thank You Kindly,

Rikki B

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thank you

This story was here for me as I figured out my own transition, and while I may have ended the story differently, I loved being part of it and having Lexi to think of as i became the true me.

Thanks,

J

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thank you, from the bottom of my heart thank you

*wipes tears from eyes* I can't even begin to thank you enough for this. This story has been with me while I first questioned myself, then began my own transition, and while my transition has not been filled with anywhere near as much drama and excitement as Lexi's, her story has been a wonderful companion. I broke down in tears and started to shake when she was outted, it struck to the core fear of arguabley every Trans person I know.

This story has been full of hotness, acceptance, and self discovery. Thank you for writing not just an increadable work of erotica, but an amazing LGBTQ story.

ram616ram616over 4 years ago
when's the movie come out

the story would make a great movie

YvesMYvesMover 4 years ago
Wonderful story

This has been the best story I have read on Literotica, and one of the best I have ever read anywhere. It has captivated me and inspired me through my times of confusion and questioning. Thank you for such a wonderful ending. I am truly moved

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Beautiful

I need tissues for many erotic stories, but for this beautifully written story, it was also to wipe away tears!

A truly beautiful story of love and hope.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Fantastic story 🤗

Absolutely loved the story could not put it down, the erotic interludes and amazing story line had me crying horny and wanting more. Loved every minute of it fantastic awesome read😘💋

LisaBrooksLisaBrooksover 4 years ago
Amazing!

I read the original chapters looking occasionally to see if the story would go beyond spring break! I was elated to see the story continue! I have a question about Patricia, the lawyer for Lexi, mentioning "We girls have to stick together"! I assume she is trans gendered as well as Mrs. Holland! They both were paying it forward as will Lexi with gender studies and becoming a lawyer! That's great!

My comment in the previous chapter was that Lexi gets surgical reassignment surgery to be able to stay at Mayweather but Patricia really got the school board to cave to accept Lexi as she is! Perhaps in time surgery could be possible!

I waited until this morning to finish the last page and I wasn't disappointed! I enjoyed every word of your "Women's Studies"!

Personally at age 62 I was fighting asking myself "Am I gay wanting to be a woman making love to a man"? The word gay scared me because I lived my life as straight! I did seek advice and was diagnosed as trans gendered! That did explain it all looking back as I dressed, when home alone, in my sisters clothes at age 10. I started medication, HRT, taking over my new life but after years estradiol gave me troubles with PE and DVT! I had to stop medication but a woman was in me! Nine years now, at 71, and I am at a point in my life where I want to have that change but grown children, bigoted, have slowed me! At this time in my life a complete gender change is my dream!

As I transgressed your story is all about trans people wanting to live your words! My personal comment of my life correlates to the struggles we face at all ages! Lexi at age 19 was a lucky girl even with the troubles she faced!

YOUR story has helped to give us all hope with our gender! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This is the best thin I’ve read on here!!!!

This is a great read, I found myself skipping the sex to follow the story. Love it!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Breathtaking beyond words

I found the first chapter of this as kind of a random search, expecting the same drivel you always find on the site. But since reading the first chapters, I waited FOREVER for any new installments, I love this story and it's characters, and it resonates with so many people. Honestly? This should be published, in full, so people can truly appreciate this.

Thank you so, so much

loveevolloveevolover 4 years ago
Love it

Like others wow what a ride not sure where it was going, but glad where it went,

Thanks the time it must have taken for us, I'm sure I speak for most thanks,

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What I learned

I learned that I"ll follow a good story where ever it goes. I learned that I already had some compassion for those who are different. I did cry at one point, but only a little.

Thank you. Please write more.

RastanuraRastanuraover 4 years ago
Wonderful

I enjoyed the series immensely. And like others I was more interested in the story than the sex. Not to say I didn't enjoy the sex but it was just part of the whole.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

thank you for this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
5/5 story

The absolute best story series I've ever read on literotica and I have read at least 50. The ending was perfect and the story had a lot of unexpected turns and always kept me hooked. The sex scenes were also superbly written and more effective because of how much I cared for the characters. It has been a ride.

RedHectorRedHectorover 4 years ago
Thank you Son of Battles.

Wow. What a captivating story. You did such a great job fleshing out the main characters. The story arc took me a bit out of my comfort zone, but it was so well written that I would not be able to countenance leaving it unread. Thank you for broadening my horizons.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
read all of it

read it all and loved it all

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved this so much.

I wanted to thank you for your wonderful story I am a transwomen, and I found this story emotionally rewarding. I have laughed and cried for Lexi, I have fallen in love with your characters and writing style. I will miss this story and am heartbroken that it is over. With love Chloe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thank you ...

... for this story. Not only the story was superb. Good writing and Plot. I was wondering about the sisters mother. Give your readers more stuff like this ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 6 Stars from me 🤓

LinneaLundinLinneaLundinover 4 years ago

Congrats on winning the contest for this really great story, and thanks for all you give to your grateful fans!

Skye4LifeSkye4Lifeover 4 years ago

I would like to take the time to thank all the readers that have encouraged SoB to continue writing this story.

As the editor, I find myself in a conundrum. While I gave SoB a 5 star rating for the awesome ending to this fantastic story, I have to give his editor, me, a one star. I also need to apologize for missing so many things that I should have caught in this chapter. for that I am deeply sorry and for the fact that it took me MONTHS to read this for a second time and see them.

I have the pleasure of speaking with SoB on a regular basis, and know what may be on the horizon. All I will say to that is this:

HOLD ONTO YOUR ASS!!!!

He has some very brilliant ideas that I am hoping to continue to be a part of

Happy reading,

Skye4Life

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing

Thank you for all of your hard work writing this series. Your editor is so lucky getting to read it first. I cant wait for another story from you, I simply pray it draws me in as much as Women's Studies did :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Long time reader and never commenter here but I felt compelled to leave a comment after reading this final chapter. This story was amazing and it has followed me through my own transition. I found it years ago as I was trying to figure myself out and Lexi's journey gave me the courage to seek out the woman inside me. Thank you for this wonderful story and for helping me to find myself.

:) K

hoborobhoborobabout 4 years ago
Well Done

I have read many stories here on Literotica and none have moved me like this one. To be able to follow the struggles and difficulties of our heroine to see problems and final triumph was indeed very emotional. I would to thank the author for a well constructed story that pulls you in and draws you along wanting find what happens to all the characters. Again well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Weather

What I wondered about was the author's knowledge of Arizona weather. Phoenix and Scottsdale get very hot, but as they say, it is a dry heat. You are not very aware of sweating because it dries so fast, especially in the spring and fall. In the winter, it almost never freezes, when you are used to the heat, it can seem very cool. I have worn a dress there, even in December, with no jacket and been comfortable outside during the day.

Good story, great to get caught up in it.

Son_of_BattlesSon_of_Battlesabout 4 years agoAuthor

Re: Anon regarding my knowledge of Arizona weather.

I have lived in Arizona for all 33 of my years. specifically the greater Phoenix Metro area, which includes Scottsdale. As far as sweating, and 'Dry Heat", just because the sweat dries, it doesn't mean that you don't notice it. As far as how cold it gets during the winter, it varies widely from year to year. When I was 14 it snowed at 12pm in the middle of the day in phoenix in December. I used to have to break up ice off my motorcycle seat in some winters every morning. Just because it hasn't been cold this year or last year doesn't change the fact that it CAN be quite cold here. This is fiction, and I chose for this winter to be one of the colder ones.

Thank you for reading my story, and I hope I've cleared things up for you.

SoB

tausttaustabout 4 years ago

I've finally had chance to re-read this whole series and, well, WOW! You are a really talented writer and I would love to read anything else you write. All the best for the future. hugs from 2π

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

No worlds. Simply thank you and i mean it!!!!!

Borin3Borin3almost 4 years ago
Superb

Have waited until finishing the whole series before commenting. What an amazing story! You are one gifted writer, drawing the reader in and making the storyline and characterisations strong enough to make you want to keep on reading. Thank you and please keep posting new stories!

KansasTwisterKansasTwisteralmost 4 years ago
SIMPLY AMAZING

Thank you for writing such an amazing story. I just finished the end I couldn't stop reading and actually I was just so captivated by the plot and the characters. And the words you wrote seemed to reach out of the pages and affected me so profoundly. Laughing at the highs and weeping at lows. It was a true privilege to read this and just thank you so very much for writing it and placing here for all to read.

ericthebardericthebardalmost 4 years ago
Incredible.

The Looking Glass was what started me reading your work, and I must say, I am very impressed. Characterization was sharp and clear, the dialogue never felt forced or faked, and the sex was incredibly hot. Lexi's transition felt natural, the doubts and fears genuine (I am trans myself, though I elected to forego physical transition). This is an astonishing piece of work, beginning to end, and I look forward to seeing more from you. Thank you for sharing you work with us here on Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Just wow

Absolutely amazing story. Really had a hard time putting it down. I wish we found out more about Lexi’s mom and her reaction after finding out about her new daughter, but this was still one of the best reads I’ve had in a very long time. You are a very talented writer!

HotjaneyHotjaneyalmost 4 years ago
Great story.

I have read it twice and it was just as good the second time.

Raquels_PantiesRaquels_Pantiesalmost 4 years ago

Son of Battles, Thank you for a beautiful story. I’m so glad I stumbled across it recently. I’m a 56-year old married guy who sometimes wishes his life had gone in a different direction. I love my wife and am happy, but have also always felt something was missing. My crossdressing is in the closet. Even though Lexi is fictional, it’s heartwarming to see so many people in the comments below connect with her.

Eroticism is a part of life and Literotica allows LGBQT a forum to share it from unique perspectives like yours.

Thanks, again.

Richard.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More than just a hot sex story...

I came for the hot sex and the 4.8+ rating, and I stayed for the story and character development. As the story expanded and the characters grew, I could not wait to find out what happened next. You are an excellent writer; the characters all had their unique quirks and flaws, making them all relatable and human.....

You especially shined a powerful perspective on someone becoming a part of the LGBT+ community. I have met people who have identified as transgender and this story has helped me to understand a little bit of the internal turmoil that can occur as a result of the transitioning process. Thank you for your hard work in writing these stories, and I look forward to see what else you produce in the coming months.

tjashtjashalmost 4 years ago
Amazing

Thank you for such an amazing story. Characters had depth, development, great descriptions. Easily one of my favorite stories I've ever read. I almost called off work yesterday so I could finish it. The ending had me happy crying. The whole story felt very genuine. Nothing forced or faked or winged. Beautiful story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
This was well great

I may not be lgbt but I know plenty of people that are and a hell a few are my friends this was eye opening and hell sexy. So I wanted to thank you for writing this and look forward to seeing more of your stories.

Mem0r1Mem0r1almost 4 years ago

To you, the author, thank you.

Mem0r1

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

When I found this story I was a secret very closeted cross dresser in an abusive and unaccepting marriage. I connected with the feelings Lexi had as she grew into her womanhood and was far more invested in her character and growth than even the sex. The development of the characters was fantastic start to finish. I've returned to the story and reread it as its expanded over time. Today, as I read this chapter, I cried. Now living as bigender, having left the abusive ex and surrounding myself with many queer, quirky, and supportive friends in the mean time the finale involving acceptance and loving support just felt so right and complete. Thank you for writing this amazing story. I didn't expect to find something that helped me evaluate and grow in my gender identity on a smut literature site, but that is exactly what this became for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Story

This about the story in general, not one chapter. I have to say, all the time I have been in here, this was one of the best written stories I have read. Nice work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I loved this series!

This has been the only series on here that i have read this thouroughly and I didnt want it to end!

AndreaSmithTGAndreaSmithTGover 3 years ago
story

Very much liked the whole story, reread all chapters now till end. thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow.... Very captivating

I'm a straight male, and I enjoy reading stuff like this. Other perspectives can be useful when you are raised in a strict Catholic and Mennonite communities. Opens your eyes really. And to be honest, this story was was HOT as hell.

AmyZhenAmyZhenover 3 years ago

Firstly, let me just say that I *loved* this story. It’s one of the best in this site and compares favourably to professionally-published fiction. Like one of my fellow commentors, I found myself skimming the sex (in parts) just to get back to the story and find out what was going to happen to these wonderful characters!

However, all through this story, I was waiting eagerly for the other shoe to drop - for Lexi to realize that not only do other trans people exist, but that there’s a massive and hugely supportive community out there who would naturally welcome her with open arms! I’m a little disappointed that it happened so late in the final chapter and that Lexi was so surprised to see them. Even in the earlier chapters, when she went to LGBT clubs, she never encountered or connected with any other trans people, or even acknowledged that she was one herself most of the time...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Loved this series

Thank you for writing this series...One of the best I’ve read.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
One of the best

So sad it had to end, but so well written, Lexi was such a beautiful character, and you just wanted the best for her, Danny must be kicking himself. There is still a lot of hatred for trans people, and so much of this stems from ignorance or just plain prejudice.

I am just glad their are stories like this that may help break down some of those barriers.

historyswitchhistoryswitchover 3 years ago

Wow. This was really well done.

This is the 3ed story of yours that i have read, i started with rent-a-daughter which i loved. Then i gave The sissy mark a try, which as a trans woman myself had parts that were hard to read though. I was kind of expecting similar with this one but you blew me away. It really made me wish i could have been out as the woman i am for my time at collage. If you write more stories with trans characters, please make them more like Lexi

Im a little sad though that Lexi, abbey, and Kennedy didn't end up as a polyamoris triad, but you cant have everything.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Absolutely amazing!! Every chance I got I was reading this entire saga and couldn’t stop. Low key was even skipping over the fun parts because of the plot. Omg I want another. PLEASEEEEE. Or atleast give us more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great

This was one of the best written stories on this site. It was more about the story than the sex, even though that was great too, not enough of it in the story. That said still great. If you are just looking for a hot story for "other" reasons The rent a daughter story is what you are looking for.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Hello, I've spent probably around a week reading this story that would probably make a book if all added together. I was lucky enough to stumble upon it when it was finished and binge it :) I'm so glad I found it as I feel really connected to the characters and won't forget about it anytime soon, if ever. I just loved the story from start to finish and you can basically feel the connection the characters have and it makes you feel included.

Thank you so much for making this series!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I am a CIS-gender male and have never really been into male on male or TS on male when it comes to erotica. That being said this is one of the most amazing stories I have read on this site. The journey of self-discovery of Lexi and the thoughtful way it was told was a joy to read. I will admit I sortof skimmed over the scenes with Danny and Trevor (rather than the close reading of the scenes with Lexi, Abby, Kennedy and Audrey) but honestly I think they were needed for the story to have impact that it deserves. You are a true author and I look forward to reading more of your work. You should be proud you can tell such an impactful story. May you have a long and fruitful writing career :)

bittensarabittensaraabout 3 years ago

I could go on and on about this series. Beautifully written with perfect balance of everything humor, drama, sex, and a storyline to die for. Almost forget your where your reading this. It's like a hot edgy romance novel made for the 21st century. I laughed out loud over and over and ended up with beautiful tears running down my face.

bittensarabittensaraabout 3 years ago

@historyswitch well said and I feel you. I wish I would had the strength to be myself in college.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I don't really like the LGBT community, because of the degenerated stuff in the Netherlands like those gay prides and such. You don't need to put all that stuff out for small kids, let them enjoy their childhood. I didn't think about sexuality when I was below 10 years old. And I know of a few transgenders who look like males with breasts, totally ugly. But if you can pull it off, why not, if it makes you happy.

But you made this story look great. Unfortunately being this literotica, I would have loved to read about the Audrey and Kennedy + Abigail sex time. And maybe of course would have loved a threesome with Trevor and Audrey and Lexi. Because it seems like he did not only turn into a woman, lexi also seem to became gay instead of bisexual something I prefer in those stories...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Well damn I hate Trevor 😒 But tbf that only shows how good the damn story was, I was so jealous and pissed for Lexi when Abigail and Kennedy first started going out and Kennedy just ignored Lexi :(

Kinda wish the trio stuck together instead of going after some random guy, sure he wasn't a dick but like damn would have been cool the.. trio sisters oh well..

Note this is not hate, I have never been so invested in a group of characters esp Lexi on this site anyway mostly just trash on here.. this is a work of art, although I do wish Kennedy had recorded Mr Creep Dean and threaten him that she would release it online, because I feel like that is something she would have done cuz of her badassness, but I guess even badasses freeze some times :( (Not critiquing ur writing, just what I wished )

Anyway Amazing Series, happy I got to read all in one day lol... Even if ending got me pretty damn sad.. Still not sure if thats because of Trevor ending knowning that the trio as it is, is basically dead or just because its the end lol.

LatexZashaLatexZashaabout 3 years ago

How about a sequel? Kennedy adopts a mtf boy and going to Lexi for help

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

What is the name of the lifetime movie? Would love to see it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Amazing story. I’ve read it twice now. I just hated the ending with Travor randomly showing up. It didn’t make sense at all.

Lexi, Kennedy and Abby should have ended up together.

Maybe you could write an alternative ending some day.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is not only the first story I’ve rated, but now I’m dropping my first comment!

Thank you so, so much for this story. I loved Lexi as a relatable and believable character. Being trans myself, Danny’s rejection was really hard for me to read and even Lexi’s rebut to his “getting past it” bullshit was still bittersweet.

I almost didn’t give it a chance with the first few chapters seeming more incest than trans, but I loved the story and I think that was one of the parts that helped Lexi build the confidence she needed to start her journey.

Thank you again for not only writing this, but sharing it with us 💙

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I would love the idea of an alternative ending!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

As a Trans woman, I really enjoyed her journey from Alex to Lexi. A lot of the inner turmoil is so spot on it’s scary. My only two complaints really are Trevor and Skylar. Him being more than a Cancun fling, and her NOT officially getting with George…I was really hoping for that one. The sex was really REALLY well done throughout but honestly, I loved the story. Thanks for a great read 💖 and representation 🏳️‍⚧️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What a well-written piece of literature! This male septegenarian received a great education in gender studies. Thanks for taking the time and effort to write it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

That was just a fantastic story. Thank you very much!

StuartLaJoieStuartLaJoiealmost 3 years ago

You are just too good at this! Thank you.

Messy112Messy112over 2 years ago

Hate this ending with Trevor......love to have an alternate ending with Kennedy and Abigail remaining sisters, Trevor just a fling as just exploring possibilities. And in the epilogue you could pair the sisters (Abigail and Lexi, Kennedy and Audrey) for their marriage and keep enjoying each other's.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is a gorgeous piece of writing, and I haven't been engaged with a story for a long time. What i thought would be a fun incest read turned into a fictional character i was rooting for. I didn't see any of the plot twists coming and i fully enjoyed the character dynamics. I was whole-heartedly expecting it to be cringy with Lexi fully pretending, but her arc of realizing shes trans is beautifully done.

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