by elno2015
You are a very good writer. I totally love this story.. Patience.. Love. An Reality between lovers... Please continue.. Was happy to see chapter 2..longer.. Thank
I really like these two together. Matt is incredibly sweet with Jason. He does want him to be comfortable with what they do and not pressure him. I really loved how you contrasted Adam with Matt. Matt admitted to hanging with Jason and didn't blow smoke to make it seem like he got laid with Michelle like Adam did. I hope Josh meets someone. He seems sweet.
I really want to see if Matt will be cool with hanging out with Jason in public at school and elsewhere. How will the fame of his father and expectations affect how their relationship goes? Look forward to more.
I enjoyed the 1st chapter so much and when I saw this update, I got so excited. It was as sexy and well written as before. Thanks for sharing
Wonderful story, I think Jason should top Matt cos he has a bit experienced and I think Matt can ride Jason better. This might boost Jason's confidence and been certain. He asked Matt to show him how much he want him, Matt can give it up to Jason. I love it though
still wondering though...what will they do if they get into a relationship with dad running for president? does that mean he's staying closeted for the unforseen future. It seems he said as much in ch. 1....will they talk about that?
This is seriouslythe best story I have ever read. There are some typos and missing words but it is the first story where it doesn't really bother me as the story as such is more than making up for it. Your characters feel so real, I love that they really talk to each other and Matt did the right thing with showing the porn he liked. I was thinking that this would be the sensible thing to do but in other stories they never do the sensible thing... In other stories they always think so much and then are too shy or ashamed and you want to scream at their stupidity. So thank you very much for this story! It feels real and is hot at the same time and I love it so much!
Nicely done! There are so many trails you can take us on with these two. The way they are both reaching out to each other in trust is awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.
honestly the part with the salt and tequila was kinda strange but this is one of the most amazing stories I've read on here so far
Thank you all for your kind words. There are still typos and I apologize, I'll keep watching for them as I go :). Some DC drama likely to ensue soon so hang on tight!
A really excellent story. I am so enjoying it, more please.
And sweet and I just hate to think of drama hurting their newness but I'm still here waiting for more!! 5⭐️
I love Jason sitting inside Matt's spread legs, no doubt feeling Matt's chest hair caressing his back. Oh, what a sexy scene! You take this very slowly, and Matt makes certain that Jason is not frightened or overwhelmed. Keep up this great story!
Your story is really progressing well. I like Jason's little epiphanies throughout the story.
Fucking awesome be a crude comment?
If so, I don't care! I am completely enjoying this story and can't wait to see what happens next!
Great Job
5*'s
When is ch3 coming? Cant wait to read it. By far my favourite story. 5🌟's all the way. just awesome!!
I really enjoyed reading these chapters and hope that there will be more. Not only about Jason and Matt but with Josh as well.
I love the progression and the fact Matt respects Jason to go at his pace. Can't wait for the next chapter
it's becoming like a proper novel. I love that so much. Thanks and don't let us hanging for too long, man ;)
I NEVER post comments but I had to for this story. It is amazing and I'm already obsessed with Matt and Jason. I really hope we won't have to wait long for the next chapters. I am so excited and intrigued to see what you do with their relationship. This is truly the best story I've read in a realllllly long time!!
Thank you to all! Your kind words make me smile :) Next part is coming soon--within the next two days or so!
This is so hot! I love this story!! When is the chapter out? Can't wait :) Hope you keep on writing about them, you are really good!!
I love this story. One of the better stories on here. I've been checking every hour since you said it'd be up in the next couple of days. It's been a week, and I'm feeling stressed. When I read, I like to read it all at once, and this waiting is killing me. Especially when you said the next few days and it's been a week.
The next chapter has been submitted and is pending approval, so I don't have much control over when it is actually going to be up, unfortunately. I didn't realize it takes several days for them to actually be available to the public. So sorry!!! But I'm sure it will be up soon!!
Publish the next chapter already! The Woodbridge Addicts are chomping at the bit 😆😆😆
This gets better (and HOTTER) as is goes on. Looking forward to Ch 3 which I am going to read now. Keep up the great writing.
I love the adventure you're taking us on with these guys. It's fantastic please keep going
Both part one and now part two have resulted in my wearing wet and seriously sticky briefs. I love the pace of the story and that the characters are pleasant people which is not often the case. I suspect part three will mean I start another day in nice sticky Jockeys!
Your story is sexy as hell! I love the teaching aspect, the watching loving porn together, the intense sensations as Jason's orgasms are approaching. You have great descriptions, excellent plot buildup and are a talented writer! Like the comment before me, I too have had "sticky underwear" each time I read about Jason & Matt!