All Comments on 'Words Made Flesh Ch. 10'

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Reluctant Trio!

Amelia and Sophia are girlfriends. Amelia becomes suspicious after a phone call from a friend. Her fears are further aroused when she goes home and finds Sophia and Estelle sleeping soundly. Jealousy thy name is Amelia. Slow buildup!

Toa_linToa_linover 17 years ago
You've heard my oppinion in detail

So i simply felt the rest of Lit. should see your work as well. You get full points for writing an excellent story, and keeping me guessing till the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Romantic... just plain awesome!

The story was incredibly well written. I loved it from beginning 'til end. This is the first story I've read of yours but now that I've read this, I'll definitely be coming back for more! :)

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