All Comments on 'Working Late Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Great start. Super hot. Glad to see this is just the 1st part

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
"EH"

Crude ,short w no realism. take as much time as needed before u post next chapter.

A preread by someone you aren't related to might help.

Headhunter22Headhunter22over 6 years ago
I like it a lot!!

Always gonna be haters. Much prefer these kind of stories to the ones that drag on forever!! Keep up the good work. Got me hard as hell!!

63lsmith63lsmithover 6 years ago
A NICE READ

Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep going

Liked this a lot. Can go so many ways now. Mary is out to her MAN!

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