All Comments on 'Working with Models'

Lovely story, great slow burn

This was a wonderful story. The more I read the more I couldn’t wait to read more! Sometimes longer stories aren’t worth it, but this one totally was! Thanks and I hope you write more!

Dave. df1921s@yahoo.com

Now we know what’s under the kilt! A good buildup and ending. Only one typo - a duplicate phrase. Looking forward to more writing.

Well written and with great taste. So innocent yet highly erotic!!

A premise that's creditable and erotic. Nicely done!

Great read, along with your other stories.

Thanks for writing them. Look forward to some more in the future.

From a fellow Kiwi.

Forgot to say, great username. Had a bit of a laugh when I saw it.

Great story except for one thing, I lost my erection at the mention of the All Blacks. Maybe I should be playing for the Wallabies because that is how they react whenever they play the ABs.

I like the slow build-up.

The pacing was bang-on. I liked the slow, methodical crescendo. Very well done!

Such a great story. I wish it could have gone on for another fifteen pages.

Excellent ! Perfect use of the English language, without any crudity. Obviously the author is knowledgeable about photography and the clothing industry, which made the story much more credible.

Plus,his interaction between the two main characters, was entirely believable.

Possibly one of the best that I've ever read.

Well done 👍

Wonderful writing, just like your other stories. I came here for Nude Day, and stayed for the romance and character development!

Slow build up to an erotic ending.

Slow build up to an erotic ending.

Great story! I think, however, that you shouldn't say "The End". In my opinion, it rather bluntly distracts me at a time when I'm lost in thoughts about the story.

A perfect story. Great character development.

Rereading all your, 5⭐️, works 👍🏻