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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good, could've been better

You got the premise right, but some parts were uncomfortable to read. Something like that old man and the queen series is a good example of how to write this particular theme.

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I write about the sins of the past, present, and future. You may see yourself in my stories.

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