by Bay2Sound
Very enjoyable. Dialogue was hilarious. Had to check the dictionary for a couple of words.
Congratulations on your collaboration. It’s wonderful! Sweet, predictable romances with happy endings are fairly common here, but yours is unusually well-written with likable, interesting characters, and it has the added element of great humor. It’s witty and fun from the title through to the end!
Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.
I frankly loved it, gave it five stars, looked for six but seemed to be missing. You made me laugh, frequently, which is something really nice to start my morning off and that is before coffee. If you are serious about more writings that develop the characters introduced here, I will happily read about them.
Loved it! Made me laugh and cry. Intricate, yet credible plot that runs without a hitch. Brilliant and humorous conversations. Thank you both!
I haven't had a good laugh in a long time. Wonderful banter and
Didn't have to go through endless sex scenes.
Really loved it !
Less than a page in, I thought, “MsCherylTerra, is that you?”
Really fun story. The crackling dialog makes for an enjoyable read. This is a good start to the collab. More, please.
Solid 5. Among the best that have been posted on this site. I look forward to more from this collaboration.
You had me at "boner adjacent". That's one of the best stories I've read here, and I've never made that statement in a comment before.
Great sense of humor and look forward to some more "chain yanking".
Thanks
All the usual buzz words for props! Hooked me from the beginning, friends doing shooters have been my downfall once or twice... I second all the comments about the dialog. I've known women who were so superlative in their vocabulary that I'd simply stop saying anything for hours to listen. Not that they spoke for hours, I was simply mesmerized for hours. 5*
A really fun read!! Characters with spines and hearts, great sparks, but not interminable enmity, thank you very much. A real treat. More please!!
One word - FABULOUS!! I loved it. Please, can we have more? I laughed my ass off at those two
A truly wonderful story ! Please, please continue writing ! You are an inspiration !
Fabulous! I look forward to many more from you because this was simply superb. Keep up the great work.
Hard to believe this is your first story. In my opinion, this is a great story, well written, and a unique plot. Hope you keep writing. 5⭐
I started reading with no idea where the story would lead. It was fantastic! You had me laughing out loud from the beginning to the end. A little humor livens up the bedroom. 5 stars +++
Thanks guys (Please note sarcasm)! My foreseeable future is going to be tied up in reading your entire catalogue of stories. I discovered this story under the (new) Romance category, and found it utterly entrancing. Excellent writing, novel storyline, and a extraordinary dialogue. Evidently the experience of the 2 of you collaborating factored into the realistic parallel in the story. Then I went to your author pages and read a story from each, staying up most of the night. They were such good reads that I committed myself to reading all the rest of your catalogue. I am now following your collaborative and individual efforts. Kudos to the both of you and I'm looking forward to catching up with your writing, and enjoying future efforts.
FAN FUCKING TASTIC!!!!!
MORE, MORE, MORE,
THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!
Be Well and Happy,
Paul
Loved the character development and the language here. Amazing work! 5 stars!
It’s a shame that we are limited to five stars. That was a hell of a ride. Loved the characters and their development while chuckling through my entire read. Thank you for a great story.
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See comment from 4 days ago, setting me upon my journey. Finished up all your individual stories yesterday. Well worth the effort for anyone else who wants to be entertained by good exposition, good dialogue, and (more than occasional) good insights. Looking forward to your individual and combined efforts.
Loved this collaboration. Delightful writing, with the meta-element of "how to write a romance."
Given the name of the collaboration, I'm hoping you will feel inspired to go to sea or at least on a boat -- perhaps sending up one of the classics, or one of the "top 15 beach romance novels."
Absolutely awesome !! Never a slow moment and perfet timing between the two......Awaiting the next and the next and the next....
It’s a while since I’ve enjoyed a story so much, the characters, vocabulary and verbal reparteé, along with the hidden and not so hidden wit you’ve incorporated into it, I can only hope you two laughed as much writing this as I did reading it!
Many thanks for getting together for this, fingers crossed you both enjoyed writing it as much as I did reading it. Regards, Ppfzz. 5⭐️
The first time I read this I made a mental note to come back after dinner and comment. After finishing this second read, I remembered that mental notes aren't worth the paper they're written on. Now on to your second opus.
Harry McMurtry? Hmmm. Might he have grown up on a ranch called the Hat Creek Cattle Company? No, wait, he grew up in west Texas and the Hat Creek ranch was in south Texas. Dagnabbit! Wrong again.
This story had me with the correct use and conjugation of “lie.” A delightful romp.
Heh, Harry McMurtry… brother or cousin to Larry? Enjoyed the play on the name as well as the play with the idea of a professional writer connecting with an amateur whose writing she likes. Good fun.